Poor baby Fira! I really liked the flashbacks and learning how Fira got her name. The poor jaguar has been through so much! Wash better give her lots of treats! And Diego is getting very sassy, I like it. I do enjoy how even though Fira is trained to fight with her brain, instincts still count for a lot in battle or how a regular animal can still be able to harm her, to me it makes it a bit more realistic. I always enjoy your writing, it’s so good!

Well, that’s an extra permanent injury to add to the list of “times Wash got fucked over by people he trusted because no one’s as nice as they say.” Either way, this story is still going strong at chapter sixty, and I look forward to chapter 100!

Cruel, cruel person! Not getting Fira fixed yet! I love Firas vision of Tigger(I believe that is the ‘weak dog’) as well as Wash, even if that did hurt my heart... in all honesty if the battles would just be very similar/the same as the series, I’m all for skipping it as we all know how it goes :) I wanted to wait to read this until I had a moment just for it and I finally got it! You always make me so happy with updates!

Ok first, this is on here? XD I had no clue!
Second, this was incredible! Along with every other chapter of course! And third, lol.

I have no clue why I typed lol...

Well... nice. I'm more than a little curious how this will transition into season 15, and the current mess/unfinished-puzzle that is season 16. Great work as always, keep up the good work!

Welcome back! I was shocked to this in my emails and I was so happy! Chester is untrustworthy, I wonder did he get distracted and not patrol? Anywho, LOVEBIRD NO! The only really capable bird is caught! And nice going with Fira’s POV making it seem like she knows not who she is and that she’s just a normal wild jaguar. Amazing chapter as always!

First, you got too used to Fira, there is a point where Wash feels her tense beside him, but she’s not there lol. And second, even if this is filler it’s still funny! I enjoyed getting some backstory on how Ursus died as well as some freelancer bonding, and how Scales just doesn’t blend! I just love updates! And I hope you do well on your finals! Wish me luck in mine too! I and others will wait for the next one, only to get super excited when they see it and hope that for the love of god they don’t have other things going on so they can just stop and read! Anywho! Good luck! Don’t die! You can do it! I can’t wait! xD

Hey, it’s finally back! Not much is different from canon in this chapter, but it was cool to see it so well described regardless. Good work, and I look forward to the next one.

You have done an amazing job with this story.
The animals are added in smoothly, balancing between focused on entirely and being there.
The characters act realistically, all while staying on the main plot. You've near perfectly this sub-plot/additional plot.
Overall, an incredibly well-made story.

Beautiful and action-packed chapter as always! I really wanna punch Felix rn, even more than I ever did in the actual show! Can't wait to see what's going to happen after this with Fira.

FIRAAAA NOOOOOO! I like how you got her trapped by the jackels, had me wondering what was going to happen, amazing job! I am curious how Wash and Fira weren’t connected during that even just a little bit. And now the gangs back together and ready to kick some ass! ...hopefully xD it’s kinda cool to see Diego stepping up as well with Fira gone, like how he led the way to meet Tucker and co and went out to search for Fira. I just love how well your able to create the animals into the story, make me feel for them so much! I wasn’t feeling well lately so I wasn’t able to read this story, made me so upset when I saw you updated! Like worst timing ever body! Lol you better not leave me with this cliffie for so long pleassssse! But at the same time don’t rush :)

Well, that’s definitely one way to put a spin on things. Nice work!

Well, I’m finally caught up on this, and I’ve got to say it is GREAT, with a capital “really really good!”

I recognize Muninn as the name of one of Odin's ravens. . . Memory or Thought. Can't remember which.

MEMORY IS THE KEYYYYY! Looked up Muninn and that’s what I got going through my head, haha. Just want to start out with a little grammar/spelling thingy to point out-during Scales and Firas convo, randomly Lovebird spoke there so I don’t know if he was supposed to cut in or not from so far away...but I liked how Scales seemed kinda cryptic, not really saying much just to hurry, makes things more curious. And then I don’t know exactly where it was but it was before that convo, you wrote animals as aniramals and I couldn’t stop laughing about it! So from now on they are all aniramals :) I love how you had Locus come and talk to Wash for only a few seconds and then had him leave, fits his character well and adds some tension! And poor Diego being Sarges voice of reason, I can’t help but feel bad for him having to put up with Sarge and his antics. And I think that’s all I got for now! I wait patiently for the next update and will ponder why memory is the key lol