| Reviews for Boiling Point |
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   KrayKrayKat chapter 3 . 12/9/2019 Don't apologise! This was so much fun! I love intimidating!Mako and super intimate!Makoharu~! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/25/2015 Haha! |
| kmilinda99 chapter 3 . 8/27/2015 I need more |
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/4/2015 They are a funny bunch :-D |
| Radioactivity.47 chapter 3 . 11/16/2014 Omm! I can not get over any of your stories they are all SO kawaii! Adore them all |
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/6/2014 Are you kidding me?! Stop saying you're sorry this was fucking PERFECT! Can you write a fourth chapter? Pleeeaaaseee? *puppy dog eyes* -xemidemon |
| stinaweena chapter 3 . 7/27/2014 There's a reason why I only read M rated fics; it's because I'm a full-blown pervert. I live for reading my otps have sex, so when you skipped over the sex scene I felt quite disappointed. I understand that writing smut is really difficult for certain people, but the transition of chapter 2 to 3 felt awkward and incomplete. It jumped from Makoto touching haru's hard on to them sitting in a cafe with Rin. So next time, please describe the transition. It doesn't even have to be smut, something along the lines of "they connected as one" or what else. Other than that, it's a decent story. I enjoyed it. |
| Silver chapter 3 . 7/25/2014 This was sooooooo cute! I really like this story and I'm also surprised that it only had 1 review before mine. Can't wait till the next chapter. Update Soon. |
| deLovelyBones chapter 2 . 7/25/2014 Hum... I liked it. :D But conclusion? you mean this story is finished?... Thats sad... But It was good anyway. :D Good work. :D |
