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Really enjoying this story and I know its been a while for an update. So just saying that I enjoy reading your stories. Fun, humorous, and action packed with great characterizarion and dialogue.

Sun was awesome here.

I really hope you manage to get back to this story at some point, it's just so much *fun*

any updates on this story? its awesome and i would like to see the rest of it XD

Okay, this is hilarious.

Oh just wait til yang notices, monkey, youll dieeee

I really shouldn't be laughing this hard right now, bit of a tickle in my throat threatening to cross into a full blown sore throat. That said: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! What? Too much?

... Oh, Yang.

Oh, Ruby.

Oh, random janitor.

This is brilliant.

Ahh, Penny, you quirky lil' bot, you. I would list all of the terminally adorable and exquisitely funny moments about her, but I'd be here all week. Besides, that would just be me repeating all of her lines. I especially liked "I enjoy fun" and the way you got her vocal tone for "menaced" exactly reflective of her "You called me friend. Are you really my friend?" line from the show, but I'm just splitting hairs here.

(And here I thought Ladybug was canon in Agents of Beacon. Older!Ruby still has a bit of kid!Ruby in her, I see.)

This chapter brings up some interesting questions about Faunus in AoB. Given that Faunus are basically the shifter race, it does raise a question of what happens when your shifter power is to turn into something virtually harmless and less able to protect itself than your human form, such as Kyle apparently has. Unless Velvet is a Vorpal Bunny Faunus or something similar, having the power to turn into what most predators view as lunch is not a productive supernatural attribute. I wonder if there's prejudice within the Faunus community about that. And I wonder if bunny Faunus get along better with humans for not being so scary and threatening in their magic powers, or just picked on for being weird AND weak? Hmmmm...

Was that a Paris Hilton joke you managed to work in, there?

According to Monty's height chart, Penny is five-five. I think somebody forgot a few inches of artificial leg on this model. Perhaps there were budget problems.

Meanwhile, I note that Yang still remains absent from the story, and thus my quirky thought about who arranged the kidnapping still remains a viable possibility. Curiouser and curiouser...

Ah. Gotta love Penny. So far, it seems Yang has no idea what's happened to Weiss. I can't wait to see her expression when she finally does hear about it. Heh.

The girls are adorable. :)

Penny is adorable as ever, I see, and Ruby seems to have a harder time getting used to the truth when it's sprung on her instead of led up to. The lack of exposed metal might also be a factor.

I find myself quite enjoying your AU series, despite the setting really not doing that much for me. It's because the characters and the comedy are so well developed that it doesn't matter you've plopped them into something more generic than the original series. You write the people and the situations with such skill that the place doesn't matter much.

I love everything about AB!Penny, especially the fact that she's actually unattractive to demons, especially considering the fact that they're succubi. From the way he mentioned her, it's pretty clear that Yang has been causing Junior suffering ever since the day they met.

I like Penny's take on AIs taking over the world. Also, the fact that she can't be fed on by a succubus.