Okay so i am a new reader, and i just caught up with all this. I'm a huge fan now! I am obssessed with Akira. What a badass.

Good!

a good chapter keep up the great work

The more I think about it the more I realized that Akira really has valid reasons to not trust anybody in the leaf village. Seems like everyone knows more then she does about her own life which is pretty messed up even if its about her own well being.

I just finish this chapter and i wanted to ask: is it safe for me to assume that Danzo is working with Fujiwara

I really like this story and can't wait to see more. I do think Akira is a bit over powered but aside from that she is pretty good. To be honest I don't really like the wolfs. It would be ok if there was just one but I find that there are too many of them to keep track of which one is which. I really like the growing tension between Akira and tenten. I could picture a chapter where tenten goes to Akira to ask for advice on how to ask out neji and that would trigger a massive fight between the two as tenten would not know about Akira's feelings for neji. Anyway I know what ever you write will be great and I am excited to see what you do with this story keep writing.

so she's leaving then she is not. For no reason. Dramatic "good bye" Then next chapeter she is training and teaching like nothing happened, so much promise but this is annoying that your chapters are either missing to explain WHY SHE ISNT LEAVIN or just choppy as hell. and after being tossed to the side and treated shitty she only acts brave be4 doing what everyone wants her to. So she is "skilled" or so u wrote but quite submissive and weak willed

I just binge read through your whole fic, and I really liked it! I feel like Neji is still believable considering the fact that his original character left his interactions with girls interested in him up to the imagination. I also really like the story line, and I want to know what's gonna happen next. I am genuinely invested in Akira and her past with Keiko and the Land of Iron.
I do think Tsunade is a little dark and strict even though I do understand how critical Akira's situation is, considering that she wholeheartedly believes in Naruto and appears to have little to no faith in Akira. That being said, this predicament is furthering the plot, and the anticipation (for a lack of better words) for Akira finding out about everything that's been hidden from her is appealing, so I'm willing to look past Tsunade's slight re-characterization (that honestly is only a problem before Fujiwara's appearance) I'm also unsure of Danzo's presence at this point, but if you continue this fic and justify it I can change my opinion.
I know I just wrote a longer critic about the flaw I see, but I really do enjoy this fic, and I'm that I'm out of material to binge read. I look forward to your next chapter!

The narrow escape and the wolves helping rescue them made for an exciting chapter. Now that Akira decided not to defect, I wonder how long she'll stay in Konoha. Thanks for sharing!

Neji thinks he's slick. LOL Ino knows more then she's saying and Tenten ain't stupid. This weapon shop incident was so very awkward. You did a great capturing that aspect, i felt like I was there watching all of this.

Looking forward to seeing how things pan out. Too bad Kiba couldn't come to her rescue. Lol

Thanks for updating. I always look forward to it.

things are getting complicated...again

The appearance of the beast within Akira was well done and what it will mean is certainly not clear. It's telling that she trusts Neji enough to share that information with him and one has to wonder why the beast is irritated by squabbles they have that resemble marital spats. Thanks for sharing!

My homie can't get a break. Poor Akira. At least Neji back now, this will ease her mind a bit. Truth be told, she should be on edge. Btw Danzo and her newly found cousin. I just hope she handle does better then she's handling her person life because if not it won't end well for her.

I'm waiting on Danzo he definitely has some sinster in store.

Also Kiba and Akira time is always a plus in my mind. She needs someone to look out for her with no strings atttached. Its important

Thanks for updating. Hope all is well.

good stuff

Yay! I've been waiting for this! Please Author-Sama! Let this be the universe where they finally find happiness!