Reviews for The Asylum |
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Tsukimine12 chapter 1 . 3/11/2018 Wait...I thought it was Luigi! D: OMG, that was a good twist! ...or at least I didn't see that coming. |
LightningStorm16 chapter 1 . 9/10/2017 I have been fooled but the twist in the end got me Good job keep up the good work |
Purpletshirt chapter 1 . 7/2/2016 I thought Luigi was the one who became insane...it would have made a bit more sense that way in my opinion but it was a great story nonetheless. |
Agent66 chapter 1 . 6/13/2016 Holy crap dude, that...was insanely good! And the twist was excellent; I had to read it twice. Kudos on this. |
Heart Ligdarre chapter 1 . 3/28/2015 Wah...I thought Luigi but the end is...Ok so...WHO KILLED MARIO?!...Wait...*shot* IT WAS *beep not wanting to spoiling but I give you a hint of 'his' name* OF COURSE! LALALALA XDDDD Puzzle 001 "Who is 'He'?" I'm VERY SORRY FOR WHaT I DID, I'M FEELING rEGRET AND i WRITING THIS LETTER FoR APOLOGIZING FOR WHAT I DID Picarats 10/10 (Oh and find a reference of what is this game) |
WhatTheFart chapter 1 . 3/4/2015 I thought Luigi was the insane person it would make more sence (except for the gay part) |
Rose of Dusk chapter 1 . 12/15/2014 Okay, I really liked this but I gotta say, the event that happened and the context and what not makes it totally seem like it was Luigi who was in the asylum. It might jus be me but I was really surprised at the end, like I was totally expecting Luigi. But I really like this story. Its interesting! |
LilacFoxGirl1 chapter 1 . 12/5/2014 Ohhh mahh gerrrssh. Luigified, you ab-so-lutely had me completely fooled! Oh my gosh, it was so unexpected it was awesome! xD This was really well-written. To answer your questions, yes, you did awesome! Yes, it was kind of scary. Especially when I saw just how insane 'the writer' was... O-O And, yeah, I'd say it was a good story! I mean, not exactly uplifting for obvious reasons, but still awesome nonetheless. Also, I half expected that last-line, but it was still just as freaky. xD Nice! :) |
Eduardo Amador Amazonas chapter 1 . 8/1/2014 All I can say after reading this is... wow. |
anonymous chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 wait luigi was the one who got the statues ...nice |
bekbekah92 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 er mer gerd this is so good I really haven't read a good story in a while *claps* lol but I'm all late :p |
Sonar chapter 1 . 7/24/2014 That is insane. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2014 Awesome story! |
pred chapter 1 . 7/24/2014 What a twist! And I thought Luigi was the one who wrote this until I saw the ending! |
DEADACCOUNT-APOLOGIES chapter 1 . 7/24/2014 Okay, *hand up* I was fooled too. (You conniving b*stard... :p) 'Yes' to all your questions, Luigified; you did a brilliant job capturing the twisted reason inside the madman. I can see 'him' snapping very quickly if 'she' were to die like that- considering 'he' spent years going after 'her', it must be devastating to find that 'she' would never be rescued ever again. Very good read- gonna have to check more of your fanfics! :) |