This is a very interesting take on the story. Integrating Journey of the West into it seems like a good call.

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I'm really sorry to hear that. It would be awesome if you could pick up your brother's fanfics, but no pressure; if you can't write, don't push yourself. If you can handle one, then cool. Thanks for keeping some of his stuff open.

nice what happen next

Son Goku has return!

Continue the story

intresting...

Is this the first chapter? What happened to Gine?

It's been seven months already

Looks alright to a degree. I understand how hard it can be too understand a language you weren't nurtured to know. Still, your story image looks superb.

This has a lot of potential; now that Goku, or rather Kakarot, and Gine are on Earth you should contemplate them finding out about the dragonballs and using them to wish Bardock either alive (if he's really dead; not sure if he is or you're using a cliffhanger) or onto planet Earth. That way he can have the influences of both parents to balance out each other and he won't struggle a much. If you decide for them to rescue and have Raditz come to the Earth as well I would suggest that you pair him with Launch or Mai (Pilaf's female minion) who are both rarely, if ever, used.

Very interesting, please continue it

good story finally something good with gine in other than mother's touch but the writer has a history stopping and finishing

It seems like a nice start. When is Raditz going to make an appearance?

UPDATE! and i'm confused why is there kids with gohan?

esta muy bueno, muy entretenido.