Slaps aren't cool, Yang...

Very well done, great story can't wait to read volume 2

Fuck man just fuck

Actually, forget what I said. Now I KNOW the movie in the last chapter was supposed to be a play on the Avengers due to the end credit scene

Was the movie Ruby and Weiss watched The Avengers? The description of the movie sounded like the Avengers to me.

Death to the racist.
I am pleased

Just finished. Trying to catch up to current this next week. Love the story. Paused and read Ren's spin-off after I read his return chapter. All in all, a very engaging story.
Starting Vol. 2. I'll most likely leave a review at the end of that one, too.

Good story never read a danfic this good I will continue reading as long as theirs more chapters

almost made world's best white rose

I like stories with a plot and 10 to 25 lemon or half n half

I liked the way you resolved the hurt Yang felt. It was definitely very poorly handled by Blake initially.

You write good smut! A tad bit exaggerated with the amount of bodily fluids perhaps...but well, I'm no expert on the other hand.

Now that volume 1 is drawing to a close, I must say it's been wonderful story :)

Well done! This was an awesome way to wrestle him into a corner. I almost think it went too welll...uh oh...

Oh God, my body isn't ready for this. My pulse is through the roof and I'm so nervous for how the next chaprer will turn out,