I need more brow don't leave me hanging this is good

NOOOOOO I REFUSE TO CONITIUE READING U HORROR OF THE WORLD

Do not enter tris but I think Chris would be a good pic for it

He will never bring that back

Are the colors of the ring representing each faction that Tris has an aptitude for?

I like this fan fic keep on doing it please

I like this story is has a twist. Cant wait to read our next one.

First: I love your story. I dont think it's boring at all. I like the amount of action there is now. I'm personally not a big fan of super dramatic story's witch is one of the reasons I like your story so much. I really love that you write from the different characters POV, because it's really great too see the different reactions of the characters. PLLLLEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEE write more, it's really great stuff.
Second: I know it's impossible for the baby to have Tobias/Fours eyes, but couldn't you make an exeption? It would make me so so so happy. I'm sitting and wanting to kill Peter soooo much for what he did ...Grrrr...

I don't like saying IT either. Love your story so much. YOU ROCK

Good story major twist tho?;)

Yass they should have a boy and all him tobias like his dad (and not like his biological father :p.)

I hope you continue the story! I am excited to see what happens :)

this fanfic is amazing plz update

Please update as soon as possible !

Please post more!