This chapter still rips my heart out! Whew.

What an excellent story from start to finish.

Great.

Re-reading this old favourite. Yes there's a "u" in favourite. And you are terrible, Muriel.

I just happen to come across your story and I have to say I could NOT stop reading. It had a perfect blend of different emotions. Thank you do much for sharing your work. You proud o how you handled so many subjects on loss and love. 2 thumbs up.

I love it but of you do the thing where they speak in a different language you should put the words in that language then put the words in parentheses in english after instead of putting the translation at the end of the story because it makes it easier to follow along.
Great story though :)

I absolutely enjoyed your story. Thank you

Re-reading, enjoying a lot! And you ARE terrible, Muriel.

Oh he told her. He's right, He should have told her earlier. They're so great together and so in Love!

So sad. You made me cry. The candle was a beautiful gesture. And once again- your writing really shows us how much Jake Ioves her. Well done.

In glad they had some consequences. And I loved how protective Jake was of Ness. He really loves her.

Hey, M! You need to put that this was winner of the Non-cannon awards into your summary. :)
I think it's time for me to reread this story. :D

I'm really hoping u r writing a Jake Bella story please

love d this story, will miss reading it... you are awesome... if you get a chance, read my story "What Could Have Been" its on my profile... you might like it?

OMG You manage to rock my socks, get me hot and bothered, make me laugh and cry and still leave me wanting more every time. You're an amazing writer and I'm telling everyone to read this. That is all :)