How can a mortal injure a Olympian enough to crack her ribs ? That made no sense.

Really ? She forgave just like that ? There is no point being loyal to people who aren't loyal to you.
It's not loyalty anymore just plain stupidity

Kymopoleia? Rhode? Benthesikyme? All legitimate daughters of Poseidon and Amphitrite, legitimate sisters of Triton.

Pleeeeeeeeaaaaasaaaase
Don’t make Ares and Percy be together
Aren’t they cousins or something
And that would be gross

Near the end of this chapter when Percy said good night you forgot the capetilise the c

Percy would have godly strength so Gabe shouldn't be able to beat her up

They NEED to be a couple

I know how Ya feel Percy
I walk around everywhere everyday
Looking like I'm OK and positive
But on the inside my soul and mind are broken and dark...

Just realised, slight mistake in the whole story. Gods don’t need to sleep

i would go for Drifting Apart. by the way, i love your story.

I FREAKIN' SHIP IT!

And outside, Aphrodite's love senses would be tingling and be like:
"I CAN FEEL THEM KISSING!"

And Apollo would be like:
"I didn't need to hear that but okay."

THEY ARE SO CUTE!

I NEEDED THIS FAMILY MOMENT! I NEEDED THIS!

I take back what I said. AWWWWWW Dionysus is actually a sweetheart without the wine! XD