I've read the full version of this ff and all I could think afterwards was that I was honestly shooked. The (great) lemon fell on second place compared to the other emotions this fiction gave me. How pitiful must have been Yato's condition before he met Hiyori? How heart broken did he feel when she said sometimes he felt like water? Behind many Noragami's character there's a lot of sorrow and it's glorious to find a talented writer exposing it.

I read the complete version so my review is based on the finished product. However, before I start I'd implore anyone who's only thus far seen the show to please do yourself a favor and read the manga. It's a near masterpiece and easily one of my favorites, far FAR surpassing the anime.

The concept for this story is refreshingly unique and I loved your explanation for how you came up with the idea. The notion that Yato’s form could change shape worked perfectly, not once coming off as unrealistic. I even enjoyed some of the unintentional humor it added, such as when she asked about Yato’s true size and he arrogantly stated, “Do you really want to know?” Funny and very much something I could see him saying. The growth during sex was actually amusing as well, it was something I hadn't come across since reading DBZ fics.

Pretty good

Just a quick note: I chose to review here because I don't live giving my email address to sites that I'm new to. I read the whole thing on the Archive.

OH MY GOD THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT AND I AM VERY VERY SAD THAT THERE IS NOT ANOTHER CHAPTER AND JUST UGH.

I am so glad that our fandom has a clearly experienced writer.

There were a few grammatical errors and spelling errors (I apologise - I'm a Grammar Nazi!), but otherwise it was absolutely stunning!

Noragami was totally not the fandom that got me into Lemon...
*laughs nervously*

EXCUSE ME WHILE I CRY. YOU'RE AWESOME

This fanfiction was beautifully done. It was very romantic and sweet yet still hot and sexy at the same time (the latter referring more to the whole story on archive of our own). I really enjoyed how true to the characters this story remained thank you for writing such a wonderful piece.

This is one of the best Noragami fanfics I've read in a long time. I absolutely love how you represent Yato like how he truly is now after having changed because of one of his old regalias. I enjoyed it a lot, and truly hope that if you ever decide to make a fanfic out of this, you hit me up. Thank you for such a lovely piece, it was wonderful.

Hey, dropping a line to say what a great fic this is! I read the mature version on your other works site and was so very impressed! This Noragami fic tops it all! I even got a little emotional at the end, sooo adorbs!

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Ummm okay so I read the story on the archive website and HOLY SHIT YOU'RE AN AWESOME WRITER. I love your story and the direction you went with it, unlike a lot of fanfics I've read, you actually keep the characters and don't change their personality. When people do that it feels like they don't care about the original story or characters at all, they just want an image, or, honestly, the body of the character in their story. So yeah I was glad to see a writer who wasn't just writing porn that doesn't even make sense half the time with grammar that physically hurts to read. So YAAAA! I finally found an author I really like on this site!

DAMN YOU, FANFICTION FOR TAKING AWAY THE SMUT!
Still, I read the Archive version and I just love this take. :3

:( Wish there was more. But there isn't.
Thanks for writing.

This was very well written. Good job.