Awesome !

Just catching up on some old five that I think I missed the first time around, and I love this. LOVE it.

All the details are great, especially David's 'hell no' when the kids recognize Killian as daddy :)

I'd love to see more from this universe, perhaps as Hook and Emma's relationship advances so quickly with a pregnancy thrown in soon. Would also be great to see the kids visit their younger selves (a la The Time Traveler's Wife'), each time sharing some sorry of news that catches their parents off guard :)

AWESOME one shot. Amazing possibilities.

Great story! Looking forward to start reading the main story.

Hahahahahahaha i loved it!

Love love love love love love this! Tears were falling down my face; this story just took my breath away. I can't wait to see what other stories you write :)

Ok first off I want you to know that I just logged on to ff.n for the first time in over 10 years to leave this review. I don't even know if I've ever actually reviewed a story before.

THIS STORY IS MY FAVORITE THING THAT EVER HAPPENED EVER. I can't even. Regardless of if season 4 picks up exactly where 3 left off, this will be a little niggling thought in the back of my head canon forever and ever and ever amen. I feel like you nailed emma and killians reactions perfectly. I don't think a fanfiction has ever actually made me cry.

You're my favorite human being. Done.

This was both a sweet and funny story. :)

This has to be the best damn family fic I've read in months, goddamyou! Their kids! Their friggin' kids! and henry knocks a girl up at eighteen...
I have a fic where I named their kids exactly the same :) Always cool to find people who are in the same line of thought.
Anyway, this was precious!

That was beautiful.

:) cute!

Amazing story! Gave me a few tears!

Very cute! I would love more stories in this 'verse!