| Reviews for Show Me You Care: Revamped |
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SasuNaru's Loyal Fangirl TDDUP chapter 1 . 5/23/2017 what?! I spoiled myself in the comment...but this is not SasuNaru? Then why is this on the sasunaru section |
Niha161 chapter 6 . 1/12/2017 What took u long enough to update... I really need to read new chapter... This version of story line is much clearer than first one... And plus it exciting to read... It already almost 4 years u stop updating , u should finish this ff before left it like this... Fuck! I really want new update! Plz, i beg u, update ! |
lara5170 chapter 5 . 9/7/2016 I'm enjoying this but I'm having a hard time figuring out how no one has noticed any of Naruto's injuries if he has to change in the locker room all the time and he was punched in the face the day before going out with Obito..? |
Arw165 chapter 6 . 4/26/2016 So it's true after all... I mean, there aren't many explanations, why father would turn against his own child all of sudden. And since Naruto has to hide his hair color... But it makes any UchihaNaru pairing (wether it's Obi- or SasuNaru) so awkward xD I would like to see how far would you go with this. |
Melyway chapter 6 . 5/10/2015 Oh Kushina with her sexy pregnant belly. |
YaoiHimeSama chapter 6 . 3/5/2015 Can you please tell me the pairings of this story ? (: And Fudge yeah, MPreg! XD Also, I though it was going to be Sasunaru :/ not ObiNaru, but it's your story, I will still love it. Btw, the affair between Fugaku and Kushina...wow XD I didn't expect that. But how long they had this affair? Though, why does Naruto keep on putting shampoo? O.o I have a theory but it's probably crazy...but it could be one of the reasons why Minato hates Naruto a lot. I love this story and I'm looking forward to your next update! |
Aikahisakatu chapter 6 . 2/12/2015 Is Obito what Sasuke says he is, or is Sasuke just jealous? Will Obito begin to develop feelings for Naruto, and give up his possible devious plan before Sasuke, and Orochimaru put a stop to him? Or is Obito really too evil to feel for Naruto, and is just deceiving him? What's going on with Fugaku, and Kushina?! Who is the child that Kushina gave him? Is it Obito?! Is it Kyuubi?! If it's Kyuubi that means he was dating his half-brother Itachi! Speaking of them, why did their relationship break? Why does Minato loathe Naruto so much?! Could it be Naruto is the actual child of Fugaku, and Kushina?! That would explain why his hair fades, and why Minato hates him. Though, I haven't seen Fugaku treat him like an outcast... What's Deidara going to do about what he just saw?! How does Sasuke even know Orochimaru? Who would Fugaku possibly disown? I haven't seen him be hateful towards anyone so far. Either way, someone is intimate their relative. Unless it's Sasuke, but I wouldn't hold on to that for long seeing as he may have feelings for Naruto. Globness, this is my favorite drama fiction! Oh, and I place my vote in for no M-Preg please! Not sure if I already said that... Anyway, I think that's all the questions I have for now! You don't have to answer them; i'ts not necessary! But...if you're feeling generous, feel free to! Hogo-sha P.S: This is AikahisakatuHogo-sha |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/12/2015 Who was the child Kushina gave Fugaku!? |
Sakeena85 chapter 6 . 1/26/2015 Ooh it getting to the really good stuff now hope to read more soon |
Celestialfae chapter 6 . 12/30/2014 Will there be a chapter when the abuse is finally coming to light and Kushina finally wakes up and decide to take responsibility for her actions and put that bastard in jail at long last? Update. |
frsnk chapter 6 . 12/16/2014 great story, but please consider cutting down on the amount of bold or italicized letters. you have far too many, and several are emphasising the wrong words and as such are implying the wrong things. The only time you need to use italics is when a character is obvious about emphasising a word - particularly in sarcasm. With too many font changes the story loses out as the reader tries to discern which type of emphasis is being placed and how to read the sentence. in the final line of this chapter, you bold 'did' which is fine, but you did not need to bold 'Deidara'. You cannot rely on changing the font in order to get a message across or to show emotion. Please consider this. Can't wait to read more, ToD |
NO LONGER EXIST chapter 6 . 12/11/2014 Is Obito really so bad? Now I'm being tricked... *sigh* I put waaaay too much emotions while reading fanfiction,y'know. Alot of the time, I end of feeling as if I'm the character. |
NO LONGER EXIST chapter 5 . 12/11/2014 NO M-PREG! NO, PLEASE, NO! |
Hiei's Queen03 chapter 6 . 12/11/2014 Idiots! How did they not expect someone to see them! It's a public park! Anyway, thanks for updating! I hope for another chapter soon! |
darkhuntressxir chapter 6 . 12/11/2014 ffnet is going crazy on me... what gonna happen since dei saw them... |