Recently read the whole 10 chapters and I’d just like to say how amazing this story is! The characters were written the same as the originals and the plot, had me intrigued throughout the whole story! I loved this story! Thank you for this masterpiece

beautiful story indeed

aaahhh, I've been waiting for this scene to happen, I'm so teary eyed by their small and yet happy and loving family, jiraiya the bundle of sunshine, hinata never giving up naruto and never will do everything do his power to have her memories back!thus, chapter 6 was my favorite chapter so far:P

You did a really good job on this story and it was great to read! I also have no idea how you managed to make us care for the characters or empathize with them so quickly. Seriously, I cared more for the characters in this story than I have in stories 2 or 3 times as long. I really appreciated how you showed how they reciprocate affection for each other and how natural you make their dialogue. Thanks for writing this!

Love this story so much! Thank you for taking the time to write it.

Wow I'm truly enjoying this story and even so easily and quickly warmed up to the OCs!

Thank you for the fic

This was excellent, I loved it. Thanks for writing this!

Thank you for an incredible story
It took me three days to finish this, and I was really entertained by it
Keep up the magnificent work !

aww finally, a happy ending! quite sad that we won't see their second child born. but uzumaki family is so wholesome! love it!

ohhhh THAT WOMAN is the source of trouble. Noooo Hinata ㅠㅠ i hope she, jiraiya the toddler, and her unborn baby will be alright

This was a very beautifull and moving story the last bit brought me to tears well done

Sorry bout the comment below. I forgot (I guess like Naruto) the "drastic changes" Hiashi was talking about were what happened in that movie I never actually fully watched. I guess you assumed all readers saw that or didn't wanna give spoilers. But I know Hinata & Naruto eventually became a couple. That's why I read this story.

I liked this story (even when I skipped the more intimate parts at the last chapter,
I just don't like reading those even of my favorite characters). I liked the angst, the conflict, little Jiraiya, and Hinata & Naruto's love for one another. Katei reminds me of the lunatic Bertha Mason from Jane Eyre. Honestly though, I was expecting a bit more revelation regarding Hinata & Naruto's past. Hiashi's conversation with Naruto (when it was just the two of them at the Hyuga compound) really got me curious about what lead for Hinata & Naruto to eventually get together & be married. Also, I was expecting a bit of mention of Hiashi at the end since I felt that conversation he had with Naruto was a prominent scene in the story. I was also expecting a tiny scene with Kimiko in a not so good mood.

I love your story. It makes you think about all the turns lofe can take whether for the good or bad and just how those shape who you are.