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UPDATE! I beg you please I will give a gaint cookie

I liked the first story and I'm liking this one too!

very good start. i'm hooked. hope ypu can update.

I absolutely loved Fire of Winds. I can't wait to see where you take this one. please update soon!

The first story fire of winds was awesome now the pot thickening can't wait for what happens next

Whoa, so she's asking for a favor from that perverted Spirit King!? Way to go, Ayano, you're officially the most idiotic person in existence. If she'd stayed put and not done much, I bet she would've stayed free of trouble. But a story needs a plot, ne? ;D

I'm so glad you got this published! I'm thinking that you got a job and an apartment if this is up, am I right? Congrats! Sorry to be reviewing this so late, but I didn't find time (more like I forgot I should review!) even though I've read it about 2 times now (lol)

I love your story its unique and creative and one of the best dam fanfictions around here i love that you've captured ayano and kazuma perfectly . They have the perfect relationship ! I loved your other story to there perfectly balanced with action and romance i would say so update really soon i absolutely look forward to reading your next chapter (i've read this chapter about 5 times now)

Awesome! I love it when she head butt him! I can imagine her doing it in the anime lol
Ah the word sequel is always have a good ring in my ears X3
I love your previous work too. Good job you have there.
Update please. And do your best!