| Reviews for In Plain Sight |
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  Some Girl chapter 7 . 6/24/2017 I love how this was written in the POV of others and not just America. I think you've represented well the affects of anorexia on others well. The last chapter was very powerful, once I got to it. The angel idea was clever, and the detachment from the reality (the banging on the door) created such a cloudy atmosphere ...its all just great, thats what Im saying. Thank you for writing this story! Yalls hard work is appreciated :) |
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/14/2016 Damn. I like the idea you had at the end. |
| Oh my chapter 8 . 5/30/2015 This story was heartbreaking, and the ending was so creative! Thinking the nations themselves are angels and have semi-human wards who fulfill their duties o Earth is just... Yes. You, my dear, are an amazing author, and are very, very, creative. |
 Luigified531 chapter 8 . 4/12/2015 This was great. The ending was really different from what I expected, but overall, it was great, and I loved the way it was developed. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2015 That Sherlock reference. |
| Berlin chapter 8 . 10/31/2014 Great story, really touching with Alfred and Matthew! Please keep writing! |
| WolfLinkShewolf1 chapter 8 . 10/26/2014 i love this story keep up the good work! though i do feel bad for alfred.. but anyways keep writing and ill keep reading until the very end! |
| Syucucu chapter 8 . 10/25/2014 *wipes tear* great fanfiction dude, i love your writing style! |
| WolfLink chapter 7 . 10/20/2014 Beautiful! Beautiful! Please continue! Please! I love this story! please I want to know what happens next! |
| kittycatpony chapter 7 . 10/18/2014 (Is too lazy to log in) Poor Matthew... and alfred ;-; anorexia never really goes away... unfortunately |
| Amy Kitty Katz chapter 7 . 10/16/2014 Ugh. It's gong to end soon? Nooo! It's too good to end! I really want to see more, but alas, fate does not like me. With love, Amy |
| Max Crimson chapter 7 . 10/16/2014 Max: UUUGGG! Sam: Why did Mathew not do anything for Alfred when he KNEW what was going on?! Helen: I hope the other nations hurry and get their asses over to Alfreds Pensilvania home. Like NOW! Max: GOOD WORK! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
| UchihaNakaharaUzumaki chapter 6 . 10/16/2014 I really looking forward to your updat! It's rare to find anyone who will touch on the subject of eating disorders. Since I use to suffer from one. How to see more updates! |
| Syucucu chapter 6 . 10/13/2014 So intence! I cant wait for the next chapter! :D |
| Amy Kitty Katz chapter 6 . 10/13/2014 I like this story so far! It's quite interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next! With love, Amy |
