Reviews for The Shield
Kristy chapter 17 . 5/1/2017
Love and sad story I hope you add more chapters soon
hpdwsg103 chapter 17 . 2/19/2016
Please update this story. I found it today and I think it is really good. I also love Fremione. I would love to see what else you could come up with.
SilverCBurr chapter 17 . 4/1/2015
Hey! Just found this story today and it is really sweet. The twist you put in with curses being able to slip past shrikes on occassion is very interesting and seems quite plausible to me. Having the effects of the curse manifest as a tumor was heart wrenching and I imagine will make the story a bit difficult for some people to read. I feel that you have a good understanding of the characters' personalities and are having them react in plausible ways. I hope you continue with the story.
chrisliz chapter 17 . 4/1/2015
I love a romance with Fred and Hermione! Keep goin with the story, you are a great writer!
fantasticallyfictional chapter 13 . 2/16/2015
I just want you to know that you have completely changed my opinion on Ron/Hermione. I'm a total Fred/Hermione shipper now and i'm completely addicted to this story. I've been telling all my friends about it because it is totally life-changing! Please please please keep posting! I can't wait 'till the next chapter! Thank you so much for writing this!
charli chapter 11 . 1/13/2015
does this keep going?!
I would really love for this to continue! Please keep writing! This is a really good story and I think that you should continue it because it can only get better :)
Thank you
hello chapter 4 . 1/13/2015
hi,
i am a bit confused about this chapter, as there is a sentence that starts of with 'eaters?' i was just wondering if this was a slight error and if there was more to the story? great story though
charli chapter 3 . 1/13/2015
I think it's really cute how Fred calls Hermione 'love'. I really like your writing style and although I haven't finished your story yet I think you are a really talented writer and I would read more of your work.
HateMePretty chapter 9 . 8/29/2014
Thanks a lot! Now I'm crying! Why is it that the best people die slowly? They deserve quick and painless. Great chapter work!
-Marine
Guest chapter 4 . 8/9/2014
More please!
moonlight10060 chapter 5 . 8/5/2014
That's why N.E.W.T stands for "Nastily Exhausting Wizarding Tests "
It's just I imagined a terminal muggle disease like the Ebola or spinocerebellar ataxia. Something like that.
Have you had a personal encounter with a person with a terminal illness or disease?
But it is still a good plot-line, and you have a fairly good writing style. Please pardon me if I'm being rude, and if you come across from one of my "artworks" (for your sake I really hope you don't, I just don't know how to write, but I know how to play music. Yeah, that compensates it... right?) please don't judge me, because I only have an eye for well written stories without grammar mistakes. Please?
wastedcuriosity chapter 5 . 8/5/2014
Who are you going to kill off next? Harry?
Aha, just kidding.
It's a well written story, but perhaps you could go into more detail on things such as Ron's death, and I feel Fred would perhaps be a little more downcast. It's good so far, I hope you continue and perhaps lengthen the chapters a bit. :)
moonlight10060 chapter 4 . 7/31/2014
Nope, no emotional impact.
Come on, five years, she still has time to live, and it might seem cruel from me, but it comes from a person that has lost relatives, everyone dies at some point.