I can't wait for the ASLS(?) crew to get together and bond! But holy shit Pauly is a bit crazy lol xD wtf are you doing with her?!

WHA! CONTINUE!

Very confusing

a foot shorter and not boobs omg hahahaha

im going to give some advice- its a really bad idea to tell so much about your character instead of showing it. its especially bad that your telling us in an authors note and not even in the story. also the line about loving "asians" and then amending that to loving anyone whos into anime, kpop and korean drama... thats pretty horrible stereotyping. id reckon its at least a little offensive to asian people. there are many more nationalities other than korea and japan that fall under the asian category.

keep on writing and im sure youll improve. you just need experience.

i like it :)