Reviews for Dudley's Daughter
Guest chapter 2 . 6/29
I don't want the place but the fishy on me
Got a lot to be but the fishy on me
Got a lot to do, I'll slap your knee
Fishy on me, fishy on me
I don't want the place but the fishy on me
Got a lot to be but I'll slap your knee
Fishy 2B but I don't know he
Fishy on me if the fishy 2B
I don't know what the place but the fishy on me
Fishy on me, fishy on me
I don't know the place but the fishy on me
2HB I'll slap your knee (Drop a like if you eat poop)
I'll slap your knee
Banana chapter 1 . 6/29
HORRIBLY AMAZING CHAPTER. not.
jgod1701d chapter 43 . 6/18
Loved the story. I hope you revisit it
edrch chapter 1 . 6/16
this story is great. i don't really believe that the scorpius would go to the wrong side voluntarily. waiting for the sequence!
Guest chapter 6 . 1/4
Cute story.
the8horcrux chapter 7 . 8/17/2019
"Use it well."
WHAAAAAAAAAAAA I LOVED THAT LINE THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU but I can't believe that you discontinued the sequel. Seriously, please update!
shotgunfairy131 chapter 8 . 7/13/2019
Not ashamed to admit, I'm 31 years old and enjoying this story soooo much! Many, many (many) years ago, my Mama gave me the first Harry Potter book at Christmas. I've been enthralled ever since. Can't tell you how thankful I am that you would take the time to write stories from your heart for others to enjoy. I would pay for this! Thank you
Miss Millie chapter 31 . 6/24/2019
Hello,
Doesn't James have the necklace that Bean needs? I thought they found it! Like your story so far . Great imagination.
Miss Millie
chaosmasttter chapter 41 . 3/17/2019
I really loved your story. The characters were very believable. I really liked that Harry was involved in the plot, too. Also the pacing was good and the scenes well chosen.
HPuni101 chapter 12 . 2/11/2019
Glad she and James are in the same house. I wonder what draco's reaction will be.
HPuni101 chapter 9 . 2/11/2019
Great chapters. The only suggestion I have is separating the dialogue, as some spoken by different people are in the same paragraph. Didn't the McKinnon family have no survivors or is he just from a muggle family with the same surname. Very curious about Bridget. Looking forward to the rest.
HPuni101 chapter 5 . 2/11/2019
Great start. Hilarious.
FriendofMolly chapter 43 . 12/20/2018
theinkwell33,
Well that was a strange place to stop.I can't believe that Scorpius would turn Dark voluntarily. I'm much afraid that something Bridget drew out while she was here, has attached itself to Scorpius.
I must continue,
FoM
FriendofMolly chapter 42 . 12/17/2018
theinkwell33,
Uht, oh. Now is this where the second story evolves? Oh please, I understand wanting to get rid of the wand, but not the cloak. Please!
FoM
FriendofMolly chapter 41 . 12/17/2018
theinkwell33,
Well Amelia made it through her first year at Hogwarts. Not what one would call a normal year, but she did with strength and heart. You have allowed us your readers to join that journey. I'm so glad you have chosen to continue with this story. There's still much to be resolved.
Thank you,
FoM
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