So I am following Bunnies adventures... YAAAAAAY you read my mind!
Bunnies my favourite!

The chapter wasn't uninteresting at all, and you've got a good set of dialogue going on. The descriptions were good, and grammatically, it was spot-on. I would recommend adding more prosaic language into the story, which already may be quite emotional, by adding literary strategies like metaphors or vivid emotion when necessary. We readers don't want a laundry-list of actions; we want a story, and by giving these actions (i.e. Bunnie getting her job) purpose and adjuncting them with prose and emotion we find a real reason why this may not be the fill-in chapter you think it is. But this only needs a bit of planning and prewriting beforehand (and some revision after), which shouldn't be difficult at all! The main question any writer should ask himself/herself is this: "Why does my character do this, and how?" If you can answer it confidently and with real reason, then we're off to a very interesting start indeed. Nice chapter, anyhow, and I hope to see more from you soon!

Good chapter overall! The descriptions were vivid, sentence structures were varied, and I appreciate the brevity where needed. Grammatically, the story was solid as well. However, there was one problem which I've been noting so far. Every character is fleshed-out well: Gulliver the timid one, Redd the sneaky one, and Fists the tough one. The exception, however, is Bunnie; we don't have much description about her! All we have are small tidbits of her personality, and as a reader I can only assume she's a bit timid and reliant on Gulliver (though a bit braver perhaps). Physical descriptions to remind readers what and who she is (clothes, physique, emotions) would help develop strong characterization right off the start, and from there this could be developed in future chapters as she changes in personality or other areas. To build a dynamic character, we need good descriptions, be it physical or emotional, as soon as we can. Interweave her traits within descriptions and dialogue more strongly, though you've got a good amount of personality in that dialogue. Still, you've done a great job with the chapter, and all this would take are some more vivid descriptions of her here and there. Hope to see how the next chapter looks like, and good luck with the story; it's unique and refreshing!

This just keeps getting better and better!
I especially love the relationship between Bunnie and Gulliver. I'm looking forward to future updates! :D

Redd, you hypocrite. You're also a cheating, lying cheapskate. XD
Is it weird that I imagine this place like Lumiose City from Pokémon? :/

Nice chapter! Your writing style is vivid and straightforward. Easy, yet thrilling to read. Just don't overload things with unnecessary details; keep important things detailed and the less-than-needed parts brisk. But other than that, great job!

I really hope that this is going to be continued because I really love how it is so far!
It's so adorable and it's a story that expands the Animal Crossing world - a type of story I really enjoy seeing!
Great job so far! :D

Wow. Imagine if something like this could actually happen in Animal Crossing. *thinks* Sometimes I wish AC was a bit more... exciting! Good fic, anyway. :) I can't wait to see what happens next!