Well that was wonderful and with that ambiguous ending I'm ignoring yamato and deciding that allows ends up poly with kakashi and obito and ends up being a bit of a booty call for gaara and occasionally temari and also sasuke marries naruto but also invites herself to the dates

yes best question to ask xD

Great!

Honestly, I’m still confused why this fic is labelled under humor, I found it ridiculous levels of depressing and angsty. Still not too sure about the point of this memory loss arc, asides that she gets the rinnegan (yay?). however, I do love this fic (series, whatever) - i think my strong feels about how disgustingly terrible Aiko’s life stems from how much I care about her. And seriously, her life is one shithole after another - I think Aiko’s life definitely goes in the top 10 terrible lives of naruto ocs - and thats really saying a lot.
Hopefully you can actually give her some proper downtime? To catch up with Kakashi and some friends, or for them to all realise how much horrendous things that she has been put through and expected to come out completely fine of? Her life seriously sucks, and honestly it feels like after she’s out of immediate danger no one really cares about her and go on treating her as per normal (e.g. Sasuke hitting her with a clipboard, Tsunade just putting her out on missions straight after (not just this time too, but several)], just treated like crap like general

I thought tsunade and kakashi at least knew she had brain damage, why are they acting so confused that she isn’t coming straight back to Konoha is she were okay?

Agh, cliffhanger?

I'm a little mixed on how I feel with Clarity in relation to Vapors. Don't get me wrong, Clarity was a good story but it somehow feels underwhelming. I'm not sure if it was maybe just me, but I sort of liked how Vapors had a whole cacophony of stuff happening. It kept everything interesting and forced my attention all over the place. Clarity is definitely more of a straight-through story. Most of the major events in Clarity circulated around the obvious conclusion of Aiko returning to Konoha, making her eventual dissent from Obito a bit of a given. I guess my biggest problem was that Clarity seemed to just follow the most obvious conclusion for the overall story and ended when that part had reached its conclusion. I guess I'm mostly just bothered because I'm sad to see that Aiko's whole story was wrapped up with the ending of Obito's plans, almost as if to say that's all there really ever was to Vapors when it wasn't. There were the characters and their relationships, Aiko dealing with her life, and her constantly to protect Naruto. None of that feels like it's over just with the completion of Clarity's overarching story-line. That's why I'm mixed. Clarity was an interesting story, but I don't feel like it's really ended the series properly. I'm left with more questions than answers with a lot of the events in Clarity.

This one, although a lot shorter, was perfect follow up. I really enjoyed the way you closed everything. The whole story, as a complete work, was a really fun (emotional rollercoaster) read. I believe I mentioned it in my Vapors review, but the story brought out a lot of reactions of me. Tbh I never knew gasping in shock left your throat feeling cold and a little dry. But that's how I was, rereading again and again the last lines (especially the knuckle deep in eye ones, because fuck I actually shuddered in pain at that? And like wanted to cry? Because, fuck?). Needless to say all the happiness seemed from the fic wasn't the only emotion, and positive ones, while outweighing the rest, were not the only ones. Although, to summarize, I really enjoyed it. Thank you, like, really, thank you a lot. I'm glad I read this story. I'm thankful you wrote it. And god bless Crowns, I'd probably die if shit ended up going down the end you described. God, I'll miss this story, I loved it a lot, it will probably be filling me with nostalgia later at every step, I also loved all the short, as well as long, dweeb notes and omakes. It's been a wild ride. So I hope you're well, author, and whether you read this or not, have a great day/night!

Aiko said fuck this to dramatics and took Obito down right there! She's cold ad tired and don't give a fudge nugget!

IJ the oblivious one

Soooo... she looks like canon Sasuke now? Interesting...

"Wait. Was this a date?"

That line killed me LMFAO. xD It'd be funny if she actually blurted it out. Just imagine the awkwardness.

Come to think of it... amnesia and reunion? Sounds like one of those convuluted plots for incest. *wiggles eyebrows*

Just kidding lol. Great chap.

Yikes. I wonder if Aiko will even be okay and actually get her memories back now.

Obito sure can lie. Lol.

Jiraiya is right on. And Tsunade and him definitely almost got it! Damnit!

Poor Kakashi. He’s blaming himself again.

I love this fic.
Akatsuki Aiko is superior to Konoha Aiko. I found myself wanting her to resist Konoha more tbh. She's just more fun and whimsical. Besides all they want is to use her.
Bit weird at the end when her eyes start messing up. She had them for months and didn't have that many problems. Then even after Sasuke treats them it only takes her rubbing them a bit to inflame them and all but blind her?
Nagato had those same eyes for years and we never heard of him having any issues.

I was half expecting Aiko to make use of the blind reverence those Ame nin showed her and become the kage of Amegakure. She had Konans support too.

Just feels like you ended it too abruptly and didn't wrap lose ends up.