Reviews for A lovers gift
jtdarkman chapter 9 . 6/18
Fang Bob and weave hun Bob and weave you know its coming. Lightning...Really lol.
Thanx for the ride thus far and please keep on writing
Feathers chapter 9 . 5/23
I'm sorry to say but I don't really like Fang in your story, like she doesn't really care about Lightning but mostly the kid and she also don't care that Light want to keep it or not, she's only thinking that light HAVE some obligation to her to keep it. It's Lightning choice only, it's her body and Fang should know that or realise that. She even got angry that Lightning took the mission cause "she don't care about the kid". Hell Lightning have the final choice in that matter, be it her job and the kid. The most important thing for now (since she's only pregnant for a few weeks) is whether or not she want to keep it and feel ready for it.

Sorry for the ranting, maybe it's how you wanted to write it but it feels so wrong... :/
ShadowCub chapter 9 . 5/23
Poor Fang, just being a protective daddy and go your lights knocked out.
Now you're gonna have to grumble and grovel. Lightning you're gonna have to stop the missions, even tho you wanna keep going out until labor starts.
The Dark End chapter 8 . 4/13
Bit late with the review but love it. Hope to see it continue.
Wjl chapter 8 . 3/6
Fantastic! Thank you so much for updating.
ShadowCub chapter 8 . 2/27
Fang to the rescue, kicking ass.
Take her home Fang and give some serious cuddles.
jtdarkman chapter 8 . 2/27
Heart pounding a bit here lol
Taiki chapter 7 . 7/17/2019
I like the story so far, but the chapters are really short. Could you perhaps make them longer? I understand writer's block, but having two paragraphs or slightly more is really short for a part to me at least.
ShadowCub chapter 7 . 7/16/2019
These people have zero idea who they're dealing with.
jtdarkman chapter 7 . 7/16/2019
Don’t do nothing stupid Faron you have a little “situation“ to take into account
jtdarkman chapter 6 . 7/13/2019
Hmm ok so far we’ve got movement. Keep it going I’m interested to see where we go
Guest chapter 6 . 6/26/2019
Published in 2014?
Damn, I though I had read all of the FangxLight stories but I missed yours. Nice to find it.
Taiki chapter 6 . 6/16/2019
I forgot I had this story in my alerts. I had to reread from beginning to remember. still like it and i hope to read more soon.
Ragnarokxiii chapter 1 . 6/16/2019
I appciate the update, this is one of my favorite stories I thought would never get updated but chapter 6 was dissapointing and too short especially after a long hiatus. :( I hope you don’t get offended but I rather be honest then lie to you that it was the greatest thing I’ve read. I hope chapter 7 will be better.
charline.monnier257 chapter 6 . 6/15/2019
Great story, i love it ! Can't wait for the next chapter
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