Oh I really like this story. Leaving it in a cliff hanger is so naught of u. Your development was so nicely executed. Love this one.

Well it was just evil to leave the story like this but I enjoyed every minute of it.

ls this story abandoned? because it is crazy good.
you should really try to at least wrap this ending up a bit better, and it looks like you'd have a lot of supportive readers for it too. good luck!

This was so very good! So good. For a shorter fic, quite satisfying!

Sarah is going to make the Goblin Kingdom a force to be reckoned with. All hail Queen Sarah the Clever, First of her Name! Hahaha! The Underground has no idea what changes she will bring!

Please continue!

CT

Gah! Great time sequence changes very smooth, love th sense of inevitability

Great description of grief and all the numbness of the little rituals that are supposed to help but don't when it's a shock. Really well described

This isn't marked as complete and it didn't feel like it was over...is there more in store?

This is such a great story. You do such a good job at showing the characters in a different light and different angles. Keep up the good work.

will you please please please do a wedding for them please

I know it's been over a year since you've updated this, but I just found it and I LOVE it! Please write more if you can...
During the late spring my life takes a turn for the worse with reminders of my mothers death, I dive into these fanfictions to distract myself. Yours has been one of the most entertaining and unique. Please continue it if you have time.
Thanks again for the amazing story
-Lexi H

I got to chapter 7 and realized this was incomplete T-T ,I didn't read it cause I am now beyond consoling because it wasn't finished (my own fault for not paying attention) . But, thank you anyway for the beginning of such a great story 3

I love love love everything about this story and I hope you update it soon!

I love your adult Sarah! I've read far too many stories that make me want to facepalm at her childishness when she is supposed to be in her 30's even, so this is a breath or fresh air. Even though you havn't updated in a year I see you have written recently so I shall continue to live in hope :)

Okay so I've been reading all your Labyrinth stories for the past two days and I'm beyond hooked. I love how you include the goblins and other details! Please update this as soon as you can!