The video was really well made. Loved it.

Story is well written and your structure is good, but it is way, way, way to fast paste. and usually when hyperspace malfunctions occur you have absolutely no idea where your going at all and it takes a lot longer for anyone to find you then normal. overall as far as fanfiction goes this is a solid 7.5/10

I like how you did pearl harbor also dont forget about civilian formed militia groups

love the story so far, keep up the good work

why are they speaking English

Truly written by somebody with zero understanding of geopolitical strategy as well as political science. The events in this story are the most unrealistic I have every seen. This is fucking cancer.

And it the case of other nations trying to attack the US, the entire world would've retaliated in such a scenario. The world economy alone would've been hit from America being attacked, so expect the rest of the United Nations Security Council, alongside every other powerful nation launching nuclear weapons or scrambling their own forces to fight.

I honestly can't see the CIS, despite how advanced they are, with their piss poor tactics, getting as far as they did in this. AAT's have seven inches of armor, most tank guns can easily penetrate 27 inches of RHA. In terms of fighter aircraft and air defense, Vulture droids have few guided weapon and mainly rely on their cannons, which no modern fighter will allow. They'd get pounced on by missiles from miles away. Even if they did dodge them, with how low Hyenas and Vulture's fly, CIWS and SAM turrets would knock them out of the sky. Sure, a surprise attack with absolutely no warning will do damage, but they'd get battered by air defenses and naval groups whenever they try those low flying world war two era tactics.

I love this story but could you please split these chapters up into fourths or something they are just way too long I don't have time to read chapters this dang long lol. just give us some smaller chapters please thanks.

Just came across this story - really like the starting chapter. I will be reading more.

Welcome back to the living bub we missed ya and i hope you stay with us and continue to bring anther great chapter in the future.

Thank you for continuing to write this story.

I like this story so far it's pretty good

You did a good job, but you failed to include the NATO Alliance which would of immediately invaded Russia. The USA and the rest of NATO have hundreds of bases in Europe including the Baltic States which would of attacked Russia immediately. Our allies would of responded quickly and sent troops to the USA to aid immediately. Also most Americans own firearms. You would have millions of civilians gunning down droids as they advanced. Also our air force can shoot mussels at a long range before tyfighters can engage them in a fight.I believe because of all this the separatist army would of have not been nearly as successful as you made them out to be. But I also believe that the paulpatine would of never orders any invasion of Earth until he formed the empire. Thank you for the story you did a good job.

Where is the rest of NATO?