Reviews for What the Horn Wrought |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh God! Please tell me you will update this because that cliffhanger just left me screaming! |
![]() ![]() I like when it says "Although Caspian had given up protesting and was mostly just sulking now" |
![]() ![]() Is this Reepicheep or not? If so, he wouldn’t have been a knight yet at this point in time. Is this the tale of a Rat or a Mouse? You said both, yet they are very different creatures. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no, poor Edmund... I hope that turns out okay Thanks a lot for updating! |
![]() ![]() Wow cannot believe you have updated after so long. I am so happy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story has me hooked. Please update |
![]() ![]() Update! It's been far too long |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I could see how Peter's 'kingliness' and loyalty to his people (and his blasted stubbornness) was also affecting his judgement. All of the Pevensies characteristics were coming through... Susan's logic, Edmund's fairness, and Lucy's faith. I also like how Caspian's speech in the movie was interpreted into the trial. Very well done! Again, great imagery and emotion throughout! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved all the characterizations in this chapter! Especially Peter! You've really captured his 'kingliness', and shows why he was called the Magnificent. But you've also captured some of his older big brother type too, which is great! Some great laugh out loud lines in there too! Also loved Susan as a warrior, and as a queen, you could really tell how they were really like 30, but looked as old as a teenager. You really captured the essence of their characters! Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! Loved the last line... it sounded so sinister! And so like Miraz. But I would have thought that he would try to play the part a little longer maybe? It seemed sudden... I'm guessing Edmund and Susan will save Caspian though. Caspian does seem so naive though... but it seems realistic when you think about it, Miraz and Prunaprismia were the only parents he knew... Wondering how you're going to resolve this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, interesting twist! I wonder who the newcomer is... Good chapter, excellent characterization of Prunaprismia, and liked seeing the calculating side of Susan too. Very logical. I also loved the part with Edmund, Peter, and Lucy. I laughed when Peter was startled that Lucy sounded like Susan... Gonna catch up and read the rest now :) Great job, really well-written chapter! |
![]() ![]() An interesting idea. But why separate them? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hurray! Another chapter! |
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