Reviews for A Long and Winding Road to Break Kagami's Naivety
KreuzO13 chapter 1 . 2/7/2017
Lovely story. Would it be possible to see a continuation with Kuroko trying to get Kagami to fall for him, only to snap and kiss him in public or something?
when u can't so u dont chapter 1 . 8/22/2015
Please do update. I'd love to see if kuroko actually manages to break kagami's naiveté. Well... We'll see in the next chapter right? (trying to silently urge you into writing another chapter) ;-; please senpai...
damons-hot-as-hell chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
i want more id like to see how he gets him to fall and get it nice job
Heather chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Lolz! Cute fic. Devious Kuroko is funny! :)
crazy anko chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
This totally funny!
hawa-chan chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
This might the thing in Kuroko's head after all!
Lei27 chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
This...is amazing. Really. *flailing and squealing* This is absolutely adorable, and I think you got Kuroko just fine-he's definitely a little imp, a Deadpan Snarker who's somewhere between being sadistic and being a mischievous little teaser. (...er...well, that's the impression I get, at least...)

However, I think there were an awful lot of commas where they weren't needed. This page ( writingcenter. unc. edu /handouts /semi-colons-colons-and-dashes/ , remove the spaces) gives great examples in using semicolons, colons, and dashes in place of commas and periods, and it's explanations are really easy to understand...for me, at any rate. I also noticed spots where no punctuation was needed at all. For example, this sentence;
Luckily, that doesn't happen, because Kuroko knows he needs to be subtle about his attraction, so as not to freak Kagami out prematurely.
Should probably look more like this sentence;
Luckily that doesn't happen, because Kuroko knows (that) he needs to be subtle about his attraction, so as not to freak Kagami out prematurely.
The (that) I threw in there is optional, which is why it's in parenthesis-the sentence sounds fine with or without it. I just added it to give you options. But really, don't take my word for it; I'm may be a native English speaker and a senior in high-school, but...that's it right there. I'm still a high-school student and a human girl, I don't know everything. XP

This kind of left me wanting more, so I definitely wouldn't mind seeing another chapter or two! Keep it up!
Maiden Warrior chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
I could see all the hilarity this fic could offer! I am actually laughing right now thinking about it!
Kagami is such an adorable, naive angel in your stories! I love it! Kuroko will be all possessive and scary too!
You should have each of the Miracle Rainbows come in each chapter and be all buddy-buddy with Kagami and helping out Kuroko (plus Kuroko can be threatening towards them if they go too far).
GOOD LUCK! XD
IruMinO chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
And to think those thoughts are swimming over kuroko's head, he can't be more creepy than this, but it's very amusing to read :D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
This seems really interesting! Kagami is so dense so good luck Kuroko! I wonder if the other GoM players will get in Kuroko's way of trying to woo Kagami. I can't to find out what happens next! Thank you for sharing this story! I love it so far even though there is only one chapter.
Mgluvsbl25 chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
I'm already loving this story I can't wait to read more and lol XD Kagami is so dense I hope you get to update soon because I want to read more! Until next time :D
reviewer-san chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
I could not ask for more on how cute this is. With no one knowing what really runs inside kuroko's head, this might be it. Hehehe... How cute and how perfect. Kagami-kun is dense, yeah, but he is adorable just like that. And he really ia a droolable guy.