It's a shame that you decided to stop writing fanfiction stories. But it's understandable. I hope you are doing well with your original books.

This story was well written. The interest was kept while writing, Although you can see it has been stressed sometimes it has never fail to be well planned. I have rather enjoy this story. I have read over 500 Naruto fan-fictions. None below 50k words normally. Most in the higher hundred thousands. This was one of the best so far. I hope your enjoy the rest of your writing and look forward to see you become a well known Author.

Grammar is trash

Kushina was not "Red Death" seeing as that title doesn't exist, she was "The Red Hot Habanero" due to her anger issues... and her hair color.

Sure Kakashi and Itachi were Chunin at 7 but a 10 y old with phisical strenght comparable to Gai? That's too much also increased regeneration helps with wounds but does nothing for muscles (otherwise forget seals, the uzumaki clan would be famous for their strenght) and lastly someone with jonin skills in all ninja fields is a Kage (Sarutobi for example) even elite jonins got 1-2 fields they are good at and are avarage if not bad at the rest (Kakashi is high jonin at ninjutsu and maybe taijutsu but thats it, his gen and fuin are nothing to write about and he has no medical jutsu as far as i know) I understand you wanting to make him op but that kind of strenght is not possible to hide, and if Naruto was a genius people would know, they don't simply go unoticed

love it so far great read :)

Very sorry to see you leaving us! But at least it helped you with your dream, so I wish you luck as a published author... Happy 2019!

sad to see you throw in the towel but did go check out your book to see what it was about the cover threw me off a little after I gave the synapsis a read but its cheap soo ill more then likely get it good luck on your path of creating your own stories ill be looking out for them.

Oh... It's a sad day for us when authors leave ff but we can only hope the best for you now. I don't know if i'll be able to follow you on amazon, the big advantage of ff is it's free (really good for students or those who don't have much money) and it doesn't take a lot of place (living in a military base h24, 7/7, i litterally have no place for civil things beside a few clothes) but i'll do my best.
Best continuation for you and all my wishes.

hopefully someone can adopt this story

LOVE IT! so much for shino! lol. I hope he becomes the ruler later. I am really curious on who is the male of his interest in this one. The only hints due to strong males so far would either be Orochi or Shino. Kabuto is out due to brotherly feelings. I am really curious though. Keep up the amazing work!

yesss

Dude you should have Itachi join rebirth. Reviving Itachi's mother and they both join rebirth. Let's be honest Itachi is a way better character then Obito or Sasuke.

Why the heck is Kushina so powerful ?

eh... Kakashi is gay? I think i missed something... And how does Kakashi jump to knows about burden and heritage and may desert the village from what naruto said? Ok i can kinda see desert the village what with "I loath the village and the kage" which was pretty stupid to say at that point, but the other two? Meh anyways this is a mostly decent story, thanks for writing and sharing with us.