There are some mistakes in the writing, but this is a good and interesting take on things, shame is not finished though..

Plz update soon

Please continue please

Wish you’d finish it

Wish you’d finish this

Por favor, escribe más.

Please come back and finish the story or at least update soon please

They're adorable and I'm enjoying this. Thanks for writing this, and I look forward to more.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! I can’t wait to see how it will go. I love Rosalie’s sweet side that she only shows to Bella... I’m also very curious to see how the visit of the Volturi will turn out (hopefully something peaceful)
Maybe Rosalie will pay a visit to Bella while she is in Boston? :)

Finish this please.

I love this story, I think this is probably the 3rd or 4th time I’ve read it since you initially posted it. As a writer myself, I completely understand getting busy and putting your writing on the back burner, but I do hope you keep writing this one!

I am not one to give reviews but I have to say This better NOT be the end. More please you write the characters so well. Your story makes me smile and laugh just a spectrum of emotions and I rarely find good story like that please continue. Hope ur well

Such a cliffhanger! I love Rosalie...and Bella! They are so perfect for one another:) XOXO

I believe that when she decides to be together with Rose the best thing they could do is move to Boston and get as far away from this screwed up coven as they can.

I love the story so far