Sigh... it always seems as if all the male protagonists are always idiots. I mean seriously! First naruto, harry, percy, and now shirou. Why do we always have to deal with these morons?!

You say you are rewriting this. Do you need a beta reader/editor? Because I can help.

Add caster, and change the assassin, maybe a Daughter in the form of Jack The Ripper?

Awwww man... I just binged this fanfic and there is no conclusion. This is one of the better Fate/Stay Night Fanfics I've read. Wish you had finished. You were doing great.

I've enjoyed this story but there is one thing that I don't understand. Why is Shirou losing his memories? I don't remember that being a cost of his projection ability.

Should have read this before that other commenting the other one

I may be late to discovering this, but i will wait for your return, if your return at all. I won’t hold it against you if you don’t return.

It's not a bad concept but ... I don't see why Artoria must be summoned as Saber over and over again. There are very few with her being summoned as Lancer, and pretty much NONE having her as Lancer Alter.

Just take your time with the rewrite don’t rush it.

This story isn’t the greatest fate fanfic but it’s not as terrible as some people in the reviews are saying it is.

*rewrite imminent*
1 year later
*rewrite imminent*
kek

Go fucking kill your self dum ass. This is an absolute piece of shit

So he goes back in time and still gets stabbed by the same spear? What's the point of time travel?

Reminds me inuyasha and kagome the first time Inuyasha got his stomach ripped open.

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