this is an amazing story. but u need to put a proper ending on . I love it please write more stories I will be looking for them

I think Eliot deserve more!

I only got to chapter 4 I had to stop reading it. Elliot would never hit Olivia

Try and fail psychology so you have Mr Parry

This is long, who has a life to read this let alone write it. Get a life babes

please do another I'm so hooked

Meh

bants bants bants

You didn't write this. You're illiterate.

Totally Crying. Blood. From my eyes. From laughing.

Poshington would not be happy with this

I dont like it

made me cry sequel please and she comes back please please please i was shaking the whole time trial was on please make her come back and get her job back after having a adopted child

This story is really OOC. No one would act like this from the squad, especially Elliot. I'm sorry, but this isn't a very good story in my opinion.

yay!