"I'm Mokou!"
mokou: "But I'm~"
Her: "I'm you but dead!"
Mokou: "Lucky bastard!"

Didn't even read it. Just stop and kill yourself please

eh? The entrance into Soul Society, the fight with Jidanbo, Gin, Healing Jidanbo, and Shiba's entrance...

all summed up in 3-4 paragraphs... Rushed... as... Hell...

Delta only fly's to Osaka and Tokyo. Also Orihime lost her brother way more than a year ago according to the timeline your playing with. It was more like 5 years, not 100% sure tho. Remember in the flashback of her brother dying in Ichigo's family clinic, Orihime was quite young, and then her brother watched her grow up, and as time passed she slowly stopped praying at his shrine. Ok, reading this sounds like i'm being picky and mean... am only just teasing you though, so no offence lol

Great, worth reading Bleach OC fics are nearly impossible to find, making me appreciate this story all the more. Can't wait for more.

who was with me wanted to review something... and He ended up cursing like mad. Hope you don't take his cursing too hard and seriously...

Fuck Soul Society, Fuck Love, Fuck people, Fuck Ichigo, Fuck life! Duck everything! I'm not saying your book is fucked up or anything -I've read worse- but seriously this book has some parts of it that like. I just wanna curse the Author -no offense- and stab the heroine. I mean, come on, does the whole world actually make girl characters in fantasy base book similar to that? Like one moment they say their strong but always, ALWAYS, have a boy doing shit to them and BAM! The whole fucking story goes tumbling down. I prefer if the Heroine doesn't act like the whole world revolves around her. Yeah, I know she is the main character but... Ugh! The way she acts -sometimes- makes we wanna puke in disgust. I know what I'm typing nor sounds like a critique but it's not -in my opinion- I don't actually have this book, heck I love the writing and would die to write like this, but I absolutely the character's behaviour in times of crisis. She's like all bark no bite -sorry if it sounded harsh- and I don't really like those kind of character. Anyway please don't take this as a flame or anything, cause tbh I'm just another fellow reader who wants to read good stuff. I love your book, honest as heck, but I dont like your characters crisis behaviour. Just a personal opinion, dont take it seriously if you don't want to, tks. ~A fellow user from

oh, thank Jashin that bony is a hollow. here I thought that you weree talking about some health problem thingy

Idky, at this point of the story I felt like murdering everyone in sight...

have u changed her name Hotaru to Hoshiko ?
and the same with Genichi to Gintama?

Aw man, don't seal her powers away again! Also, with powers like that, wouldn't Aizen want her to be on his side like he did orihime? That sounds like it would be interesting. Love your story! Please update soon!

Well... That escalated quickly

Just got back from vacation with my family, so I'm sorry for not replying to your message earlier.
I will admit, this was a pretty dark chapter. But it is to be expected with Ichigo fighting his inner-Hollow. I feel terrible for Hotaru. Almost being *ahem* raped by her own boyfriend, even if it wasn't really Ichigo. Thank god Renji was there, though. I can imagine Ichigo feeling terrible as well. Not knowing what was happening until he was 'woken up' or brought back to reality.
We'll see how things will go now. The air is most certainly going to be pretty tense between Renji, Ichigo, and Hotaru (perhaps Rukia as well if she finds out what happened). To be on the safe side, though, I'd probably change the rating to M instead of T. Especially if there may be more scenarios like this in the future.

Absolutely love it still.
It is nice that the Old Man (aka. Gramps-Yamamoto) is letting Hotaru off the hook for a while, with the exception that they keep monitoring her. A little bit of freedom is better than nothing. Not to mention, Hotaru doesn't have to worry about the collar possibly killing her, at least that what it looked like what was happening to her. Taking away one's powers is like taking away their own life force.
Having Arisu announcing his 'break-up' with Hotaru to his mother must have been difficult for him, especially since he does have feelings for her. Making it seem real and acceptable should be good enough to keep the mother off of Hotaru's back...hopefully.
Can't wait to see what you have in store next. Glad to have the gang back.

Loved the chapter can't wait to read some more! Keep up the fantastic work!