The things we do for those we care about;) It was a good idea of Shep to take a small detour.

Aaaaaw. You don't cease to amaze with little fluffy pieces.

I like the whole idea. The little chat they had. Especially the thing with no Quarian saw Rannoch since the morning war. That was soooo sweet of Shep. Maybe that was the point where Tali realized how she feels about Shepard.

The little look in the future at the end was awesome as well. The whole paragraph was very well written and quite poetic

Overall good job. Keep those fluffy things coming.

Phil

This was great. A few typos here and there, but a very enjoyable piece of yarn otherwise. Good job!