I see that you have all the thinking adults (Sirius and Hermione) drinking from the Dumdum kool-ade. There was no need for him to be so cryptic except for keeping Harry so befuddled and open to allowing Moldy to kill him. Why did it take Dumdum a year to show Harry memories that should have taken one full day to show? The only info that he didn't have was how many Horcruxes Lord Chicken Shit made. Besides what took him so long to act on these memories. He had them for years as most of them where of people who were dead by then, which tells me that he knew that Moldy had done something so evil.

I was scriptural to read this story because the reviews were half and half on if I should read it. But I’m glad I did. You’re writing has improved over the time period that you’ve been writing this. I hope you continue writing this story. I want to see how you do with. Good luck and great job.

Another reason I have always disliked Molly and Ginny Weasley. The way they treated Fleur and Molly allowing Ginny to call her Phlem. Pissed me off. You don't have to be the woman's best friend but don't disrespect your brother choice of wife.

I love Sirius and Hermione stories, but couldn’t read this one, being from Sirius’ point of view, wouldn’t of being different, but the over use of I, made it to much. Other words phrases need to be used to avoid over use.

Why couldn't Sirius just go as one of the Harry's?

hello i read again your story and i miss it. when do you think you'll post again ?
i look forwards to read the next chapters and i Wonder when they will see Sirius again. i hope to have news soon from you. - Maha from Paris

I absolutely love this story I read it in one sitting couldn't put it down! eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Loving this story! The plot is well-structured and interesting, similar but not too similar to the actual story. Great characterisation and overall writing. I look forward to the next chapter!

This is really great so far! I’ll leave a longer review at the end but I am definitely enjoying this story!

I am so set for the malfoy manor scene. Ssooooooo SET

You're not going to reunite them until they get to Shell Cottage after Malfoy Manor are you? When Remus shows up to tell them about Teddy?

I really enjoy this story but this chapter except for the very end with Sirius and the one detail about Harry having his own wand it's exactly the same as the book a couple of the chapters have been like that lately I'm just wondering when all the original content will be back? Will Bill have at least told Ron that Sirius is alive and well?

I think he should go back with Ron. Soon

Resisted reading this for a long time (was going to be too long and no romance really) but now I've read it all at one shot and it was good. I'll be following from now on.

Chapter's 55_57_60?! •-• ~_ _ ! Book's - :) !