A bit unrealistic that everyone is redeemable, first jean now scott

Chapter 20
Great chapter, Jean is redeeming herself. But Scott needs Logan to give him what for.
If Jean knew Rogues name was Marie why did she tell Logan she’s never heard anyone called that, and need to look up on a computer to see, there was only a child called that?

If all she had on was Logan’s boxers and a vest and he was touching her and carrying her, why didn’t Charles notice, as he doesn’t know she has control of her mutation, this doesn’t make sense?

This bit here: "So'm I," She snarled. It was plain that Rogue wasn't having anything to do with Scott's justifications. "When Logan and I were hanging out in full view of the student body, in public places where anyone could walk in, did I really need protection then? I had over a dozen chaperones. But you and Jean went to Xavier and told him that Logan had an 'unhealthy' interest in me. And then you went to every other adult here and planted all those seeds about Logan being too attached. You said how it wasn't good for me to be 'so close' to such an older, uncivilized male. Who knew what I'd let him do to me? Hero worship is unhealthy right? I was too young to know how bad he was for me."
Sounds like Scott’s relationship with with controlling and manipulatative Jean.

Been going through your stories, and I've been enjoying the experience!

While I've been enjoying the story well enough, I can't say I care for how, barring a few exceptions, most of the Xavier's people are so wildly rude and obnoxious it feels a bit contrived.

Please write more a sequel of the children and dchoo they have, and maybe them always beating the X-Men to jobs and saving people first.

If she’s absorbed both Logan and Victor she shouldn’t have any scares they should of gone, as should her calloused feet,?

I hate when people judge you on how you desss as whether you can afford something. Had something similar happen when I went to buy a pc once, I shouted loadly at the shop people if you don’t think my money is net good enough I’ll go spend a it somewhere else. Never went back in there again.

my sincerest apologies, for not reviewing this for so long despite have reread this so many times, with ever I'm the mood for a x-men story I almost always come back to this one, so the realization that I never reviewed, was quite a blow for a story that I just simply Adore, I should also mention that you're version of Wolverine I like a lot more, all an all great story, you are doing well and I wish the best.

Keep mds feels incomplete, like what happened with their version of their school, and to Scott, whabwas his and Xavier’s reaction.

I loved this fanfic so much I hope you contiune to write rogan fanfics in the future :)

I loved it.

aww I loved this story . well done !

I absolutely ADORE this story!