i think that maybe sonia and manic dying in an oven was a little...Weird?

It would make more sense if it were tragic. Like, all of them snuck out of the castle and sonia and manic got killed by assasins. That would be more interesting, and would make sense.

Are you actually kidding me, are you serious omg WHY

The story is awesome and very interesting. I hope you do more like this.

AND AWESOME AND AMAZING AND EVERYTHING IN BETWEEN!

Oh,thank Chaos!I was so worried about Silver

Look I'm sorry but I'm not checking reviews on this anymore.
The story is finished.
Why write critiques on something so old?
I don't really care about writing anymore.
I'm done with the sonic fandom at this point in time.
I look back at this stuff and cringe.. it's only up because people liked it while I was still writing it.
You may think I'm a bitch for saying this but I'm telling the truth. You're wasting your time writing out reviews and critiques on this. I'm not going to look at them, sorry but I'm just done with writing fanfics. Don't know if my thoughts will change but for now they stand. I'm really sorry but that's just how I feel.
-The author, BlueStarNights

The story itself is good but I would greatly appreciate if you could name it properly. I am quite honestly getting sick of people being unable to tell the difference between Sonadow and Shadonic. THIS STORY IS NOT SONADOW, IT IS SHADONIC, AS IN FACT, YOU HAVE PUT SHADOW AS THE SEME NOT SONIC. I apologise for that but I am sick and tired for people misleading their readers. But all in all, the story (up till when I stopped at Ch. 15) was well written. The gradual progression of the relationships between characters and the use of a slightly different main character list was refreshing.

This is a great story

Had a nice plot. But the chapters are miraculously short and there's not much material in each chapter. After five minutes, I'm already done at least five chapters. This had a lot of potential, and it was an-okay read. I just wish there would have been more.

Oh my god...that was great!

Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun!

Oooooooooo Shadows having it HARD

Just a small bit of constructive criticism. I liked the story as a whole, it was well written and interesting.

However you should try and make the chapters longer. A good rule to follow is to make each chapter at least 1,000 words. This doesn't necessarily mean rewriting chapters to be longer just combine 2 or 3 smaller chapters into a single one.

Is that Cal?

I agree!