I am crying... I can't tell you how happy I am to see a writer who put so much love and comitment into their story. This is truly the best story I have ever read. It's so good that I'm going to read it again right now.

THis is by far one of the best stories I have ever read.

beautiful

This is interesting, but also very AU. Thorin was 24 years old when Smaug attacked Erebor, not 120. The quest for Erebor takes place 171 years after Smaug took it, when Thorin was 195. Also, Bifur, Bofur and Bombur were Khazad Dum dwarves originally before they moved to Ered Luin. They never lived in Erebor.

This made me cry...I really thought they were about to break up, it hurt my heart but it was also great because she was so understanding of it...urgh this story is so good, i normally read the whole thing and then comment at the end but this chapter was so good and hits my feels so hard I had to just tell you now how amazing this story is!

ich liebe die geschichte. und der alternative abschluss ist definitiv viel besser ! lg hayne

Wow. Just wow. Fantastic. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful work of fiction with us. Amazing job!

This was a wonderful story. I liked both the original and alternative ends. They suited the characters you created and I absolutely loved it!

Yaaay. I finished reading it. This was a fantastic piece of writing, I loved the story, Hana is such a great character, very well written. And may I say that I prefered the latter ending. The first one made me cry , but was still a good ending, I just prefer happy ones. Also thank you for writing this, I think any writer of fanfic should be thanked for writing stories for their own reasons and yet let others read, without profit, so thank you for a great story. :)

You're so mean. :[
Waaaaaaaaaaaaah!
(Sniffles)

patetic!

I spent every free second in the past week reading this loved it

You said that the statue of Dain could have rolled either way. One way it would have rolled off of Hana, and the other would have crushed her. I would enjoy/be heartbroken by that alternate ending as well.

Congratulations, you've brought me to tears.

I'm writing a fanfic on a different website, and my main characters name is Ethir. She's bad as well, but she doesn't have magic and stuff... She was tortured by Sauron. Anyways I love this story. You should come up with more epilogues! Like maybe one where she regained use of the muscles in her leg and had a good fake leg and went on the company with them and stuff... That'd be cool.