Stunning
Thank you for sharing

Fantastic piece, JAL. Each of the song titles are used perfectly and you can feel the longing each man has for the other. :-)

I do love Sherlock's responses near and at the end. "Because you care?" and 'Wish you were here..."

I'm so glad I found this alert in my clutter email inbox. :-P

Lovely! The interspersing of the storyline with the titles was a nice artistic touch. Play on with all this your writing. I like it!

Somehow, I don't think a postcard would have been enough.

Some things are worth waiting for - and this is one of those! What a fab story, really neatly dovetailed in a favourite song's lyrics.
I'd quote favourite parts, but I'd just end repeating the entire thing. Thank you for this lovely 'present', my friend.

Could taste the longing for home. Felt the hurt at being left. Giggled at the "punchline."...It was worth the wait. Well done.

Deftly woven together.

Well done:-)

A lovely story. :-)
I especially enjoyed the final section where Sherlock really didn't see that fist coming! LOL!
Some very poignant moments - lovely!

I love the last part. That was a cool touch. Well done as always.

I got all teary. It's such a moving song, and the lyrics fit so perfectly for what our boys were going through. Beautifully realised.

I loved this! Omg omg. The feels especially the way you split the scene! It brought tears to my eyes! Lovely! Absolutely lovely! Instant favorite!

Absolutely love this! So clever & moving! Love the juxtaposition! This is brilliant! well done!