Loved it. Waiting for the sequel and epilogue

Please update soon

nice! cant wait for the next chapter!

Aw how sweet! I hope you continue!

I'm making the classic derpy 'huehue' face over here. Thanks for writing & posting this. So much. They're such a sweet/terrifying couple. I love it. I hope you do at some pt feel your muse tugging you this way once more, as I am curious to see how their relationship weathers their pasts, & their combined futures.

YEEEE. I loved it. I was super, super glad you didn't let Kagome get controlled by her for too long. & that she broke out of the control w her own power. & that she didn't faint afterward. No Damsel in Distress here. Praise.

Oooh, I may have been hoping for Kagome to be able to deal with Hadriana herself & not even faint or collapse afterward, but that was prob too much to ask for. Considering she essentially just took down an entire hideout on her own. She just didn't get to finish the minor Boss before help came. & boy, am I looking forward to their reuniting. :)
Thanks for writing/posting as always!

For some reason I feel like your weiting noticeably improved this chapter? Weird. I really enjoyed it, though. I love how you interspersed the action & dialogue.

To be 100% honest, I didn't really see the relationship building b/t Kagome & Fenris, just read of the aftermath, so I do feel the romance was rushed. I'm also a lil surprised neither Kagome or Shippou brought up the family Kagome has back in the other world. I can't imagine she'd be able to just forget them so easily? I do still like this story, though, & I am excited to see what happens as Kagome travels.

Oh my. Morrigan/Shippo is a pairing is have never even considered & definitely did not expect, especially since I still see him as a kid, but. Huh. Interesting. I'm still wondering about Kagome's life/the plot before she came to the DA-universe, though. What was her relationship with the others like at that pt? What about her family in the modern era?
Again, thanks for writing/posting!

Oooh. Well that sort of answers my question about Shippo's age. Though, not super clearly, as youkai age seems to be a tricky thing. Looking forward to seeing how you continue this!

Still thoroughly enjoying this. A few questions came to mind though? Like how far in her Inuyasha journey was she when she got popped over here? How old was she at that pt? When/why did she have to kill her first human being during her first seven years? Where/with whom did she leave Shippo, if he's still essentially a kid in human terms? Are her powers/senses thrown off at all in this new world? Did the shikon lose its powers before or after she arrived here? Do her powers 'purify' the same way they did with youkai?
On a different track... How did their first festival experience go? What kind of stories did Kagome tell of her past? Her family? Sengoku-jidai? Kikyou and Inuyasha?
All that aside, v few typos/grammatical errors, as per ush. Thanks for the chapter!

It's been a really, really long time since I've reviewed anything on here, & even longer since I've reviewed one of your works. Domino Effect ised to be one of the fics I followed w a passion, so I tried checking out your profile again on a whim. So glad I did. I'm really thoroughly enjoying reading this old work of yours. I've been getting an itch for some good fantasy/adventure & this looks like it will scratch it pretty darn well! Thanks and well wishes from one of your, uh, older readers. :)

Wow, it's already been more than a year and I still find myself coming back for more. I'd forgotten the name of this but could still vividly remember enough of the story to google search this. I admit I kept searching with Elder Scrolls rather than Dragon age though, you can tell I don't play the either game. Had to resort to his name and elf as keywords... But even if I have to wait another year or so for it, so long as this isn't labeled complete I'm sure I'll come again once again. As always, looking forward to the next chapter~!

Please please please continue this story I'm in love with this couple I can't wait for more