Reviews for A Criminal's Son
Helen chapter 1 . 7/5
Uh, guys? I mean he's so flat. It's like he doesn't have a personality of his own. I'm Black's son. My mom left me. I hope she's fine now. No affection,nothing. My aunt's a witch. So is my cousin. I could be teaching the History of Magic class. Blah blah blah. Overall it's fine.
Comic Rocker chapter 1 . 5/13
Please keep the fic going its got so much potential and the pairing is more plausable than ron and hermione.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5
The black family had the tradition of naming their memebers after constellations and star.
Ari Ortega chapter 1 . 4/4
please continue and please include more Hermione and Tony scenes
blackluv chapter 9 . 3/13
umm i dont think sirius black would name his son after his bitch of an uncle
mcnexusbros chapter 49 . 2/11
please continue.
simsic chapter 10 . 11/26/2019
This sucks, 10 chapters nothing new, why add a 4th person if he does nothing different form the book. You could make him a prankster if he knew about sirius or smthing
XenoLucifer chapter 3 . 2/18/2019
...I mean... his presence doesn't change anything, everything so far has been canon, like, if you add an OC as a main character then you need to hand him the stage so he can show off and be "cool" no one wants to read a story where the main character just stands there as a spectator.

You can argue that he did speak with Hermione but it didn't stop the troll from catching her in the bathroom did it? Every time he does something unique it needs to have an impact on the story.
Jason Howlett chapter 49 . 11/22/2018
Please update bring this back to life this is so good and we need to see it end please or pass the story to someone if you are finished with
muhamed3871 chapter 49 . 9/20/2018
Please update this story it is great and I can't wait for you to continue.
BrxkenArrow chapter 46 . 7/22/2018
Cedric Diggory did die in the book, but did you forget that you made Anthony the Hogwarts Champion, not Cedric, in this story? Cedric wouldn't have died here. He'd be alive and well.
Janie Robinson chapter 22 . 7/17/2018
This is great.
muhamed3871 chapter 49 . 7/6/2018
Please update this story it is incredibel
Eternal Bloodlus chapter 49 . 6/3/2018
Love the story please write more
Sid chapter 49 . 5/20/2018
This was very wonderful so far!
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