I only have 1 request. Could you make Gwen catch a Shinx? I think they would be a cute team.
I also already LOVE this!

It’s a real shame that this story hasn’t been updated in so long, I feel like it had massive potential. And of course it stops right before we look at the Sinnoh team, which is my favorite of the lineups, though Kanto comes close.

I could say the same about Staci

Plz make another one soon

This is very interesting,usually its pokemon competing in TDI so it's nice to see something different

I''ve been waiting for 2 years for you to post a chapter 6, but chapter 6 is still not up yet. I hopped you updated 10 chapters to your story, but there's still only 5 chapters to your story. Did you give up or what. We need to know.

Helloooo, are you making chapter 6 or what. If you're quitting the story, you could just say so. Until now, I'm still expecting chapter 6 to come out you know.

Please Please PLEASE UPDATE this story

Please update

I really think that Dawn should get Lucario from the Fighting Gym leader since they both can read auras, and I think Lucario will like Dawn.

Ezekiel Zebstrika's moves
1. Shock Wave
2. Wild Charge
3. Agility
4. Flame Charge

Dawn Aromatisse's moves
1. Trick Room
2. Dazzling Gleam
3. Moonblast
4. Disarming Voice

The reason my friend CMC decided Dawn would have a Spritzee instead of Dedenne is because he thought that it would be better for Dawn to catch a Spritzee instead of Dedenne.

Dawn Aromatisse's moves
1. Psychic
2. Moonblast
3. Misty Terrian
4. Disarming Voice

Dawn's pokemon
1. Fennekin
2. Spritzee
3. Roselia
4. Swablu
5. Caterpie
6. Lapras