Reviews for Worldwide |
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Althea Sirius chapter 2 . 3/27/2019 Well it was interesting while it lasted. |
Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 3/27/2019 A really cute start! |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/28/2014 Hahaha! This is awesome! Keep it up! Update soon! |
Angryhenry chapter 2 . 7/27/2014 Wow, a little rushed, not enough conflict, too cliché, too, vague, and too, perfect to be real |
lorde chapter 2 . 7/15/2014 Wwwwwwwaaaaaah forbidden love |
UnbreakableWarrior chapter 2 . 7/16/2014 this is very amazing please update soon :) |
faisyah865 chapter 2 . 7/16/2014 Nyah, I almost cried! (I'm a VERY emotional person...) Great chappie! Though, a bit more description would have been great. An insight on Astrid's thoughts and feelings. But not too much, cause that'll be a bit boring. Love Ruffnut's character! And make sure to make Hiccup sarcastic! What's Hiccup without sarcasm? XD Is she coming to the tour with him? I don't want to see them apart! X'( Please update soon! |
UnbreakableWarrior chapter 1 . 7/15/2014 good start :D |
faisyah865 chapter 1 . 7/15/2014 I always love all these modern AUs! |
kornerbrandon chapter 1 . 7/15/2014 A really good opening chapter. I like how you've written it so far and I hope you continue soon. |
qwq qweqq chapter 1 . 7/14/2014 Yeah, OK, not really caring too much about your story - not my normal cup of tea - but you kind of misspelled "Worldwide" in the title. Just thought I should do my civic duty and point that out. As long as I'm doing that - you missed a full stop, near the top. In the paragraph that starts with "I'm going to get something to drink." And one more right at the bottom - last paragraph. If there are two, there might be a few more - I don't recall completely - but missing full stops are my pet peeve. I guess that's it. Not my cup of tea, but the fic isn't bad, really - though if it takes you a month to write a 3,000 word chapter you may want to consider a career that isn't writing books (I'm kidding. Do whatever you want). Keep on keeping on. |
AquamarinePisces chapter 1 . 7/14/2014 Nice beginning. I like this story. There's a lot about Hiccup being a secret singer, but this is the first one I read where everyone knows his identity. |