"When have I ever let you run off and do something so idiotic alone?"

Love it.

like this

This is a really cool story, I don't think I've ever read one from Aragorn's point of view before.
The only thing I would point out is that there are a few spelling errors throughout it. Just minor things like "Counsel - Council" that don't get picked up by spell checkers, so you might want to read over each chapter couple of times more before posting them.
Still, I like your writing style. It flows well and is original. Good work. :D

Mary Sue screams "save me!" But maybe it should be louder to hear passed the badly written angst. Oh I know how this goes other bad writers will say keep writing so you give them good reviews too and others say it laughing behind their hands at you. No matter how they "love" this in reviews isn't going to help the truth that its rubbish. It's not well written and like most people you don't have down their way of speaking or how they act. You focus too much on your Mary Sue and making her sound good rather than anybody else when the idea was its a Tolkien fiction. Waste of time miss angst Mary Sue

Yay, Legolas has arrived!:) You did a good job of portraying the effects of the shadow on everyone. Legolas is certainly having a difficult time. I feel sorry for him. Looking forward to more.

Interesting to read it from your point of view, or rather, Aragorn's point of view I suppose. I can't help but wonder when the Legolas angst will come into play, though...ha, ha. I do love your writing style.

I hope you update soon!

I love it!

Nicely done! I hope there will be more.

LUVVIT!