Hey, this is awesome! I'm a big fan of Snow and Killian having adventures together. Having them discover that little Neal has magic and that he's using it to make legions of tiny clowns appear is genius. So cool to see them working together to fix it!

Would have been funny if hook got pied in the face

This was hilarious. The interaction between the two was adorable and the plot iself was interesting and well thought out. Great job

Oh, I needed this after all those angsty drabbles! This had so many great line and moments: Emma trying to bribe Killian with "fun" later, Snow worrying about traumatizing Neal if she stabbed them like in the movies... I know I'm missing loads more. And how ironic that his hook came in handy for just the purpose they were trying to avoid with the bouncy house earlier. Glad it put Snow and Killian on more comfortable footing, though I'm a bit sorry that Neal didn't want anything to do with him after that.

Awwww, poor Killian, I hope he gets back into Neal's good books! :( I liked this one-shot, even if I didn't like that part - loved the puns at the end though. :) I hope you write more for this fandom!

LOL. Loved the end.

The fact that Emma introduced Killian to clown horror films had me laughing so hard! I couldn't even get through my food!
But it breaks my heart how baby Neal rejected him after :(

Omg, Snow x Hook brotp gives me life. THIS gives me life! I LOVE IT!

I freakin loved this! Awesome

Aw, that was pretty funny and cute :)

Great story really liked it

This was so funny! Perfect story to read on the train to work! :)

really funny, it was great and clowns are creepy.

Reading this at 1:30am when the rest of the family is asleep is not good as I am laughing hysterically and most likely too loudly. Too funny and as I read I could just picture Hook and Snow's faces. Do more one shots like this please.

Could not stop laughing,! Really it has been twenty minutes and I finally calmed down enough to write this review.