Oh my goodness! what a work of art! Perfection!
Can't wait for an update!

Great story i love your take on the movie and what could of happened and then the whole time travel . Really enjoying this ! thank you

Instead of Leo, they got Raph this time.

Yeh! I've just read your chapter and I loved it :) this time it is not Leo who is trapped but Raph... I wonder how the story will go :/

But something is strange however... I mean, why does Leo accept that Raph go topside alone ? He is injured ! :( it is unlike Leo..

But I really lived it, go on please !

Yep. Raph getting caught instead of Leo makes more sense in this AU. I sure hope Leo can save him.

BTW, as a fanfic author myself, I would advise not worrying about how often you update. It's more important to take as much time as you need to refine chapters. They should only be posted when you feel satisfied with them. The longer the chapter, the longer that "Yes, this is right" feeling takes. At least, in my experience. All I'm saying is don't feel rushed. Most people get that we have lives away from the Internet, too.

Nice conclusion, making Raph really get to the heart of the matter. I do so love Leo's perceptiveness. Not sure Donnie and Mikey will take it so well, though. How can they trust Raph if they know he's a murderer? Whether he's sorry or not, whether he confessed to Leo or not, it doesn't change the fact.

Raph, it *was* your fault. Don't be a bastard. Wait...Never mind. *wanders off muttering*

As an aside, I really hated the characterizations in this movie. Except maybe Karai. I liked her.

Poor Leo. I totally get where he's coming from. And Raph just made things worse 'cause he promised to face his brothers and didn't. Both have to live with the fact that Raph is now officially a murderer. And Leo...Living with his killer under the same roof. Yikes.

I remember watching the movie and thinking Raph was truly going to kill Leo then. I was afraid. So this AU isn't too much of a stretch.

Very sad beginning. And those swords. They are Leo's spirit and identity. Killed in every way. It just hurts.

Oh no! Raph has been captured! :O It's just like the film. Well OK, almost like the film.
I'm dying to read more! :)

Ohhhhh... Raph got captured this time. I'm loving the tweeks you are making from the original plot.

Loved the chapter and definitely loved the ending! :D
Looking forward to reading more! :)

Aww! The ending was so sweet! They need to forgive each other more often for mistakes, though a death is not something that can usually be given a second chance. But they were lucky for the ones that granted them a second chance at life.

I feel like Raph and Leo made a closure about what happened in their time when Raph kills himself and killed Leo in the rooftop. And Leo like he always is help to his brother and forgave him for what Raph did and Leo also asked for forgiveness for what he did in Central America when he forget him and stopped sending letters. But I don't think the things are going to end in this way, right? There's something else that could happen and put their brotherhood into danger...Or I'm wrong. Please update soon. I'll be waiting. Good luck and take care

That was sweet moment