| Reviews for Such a Perfect World? |
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   TheDragonMage19 chapter 4 . 5/11/2018 Okay, there are a few typos in this, and don't get huffy with me just cause I am pointing them out, break is spelled B-R-E-A-K, not B-R-A-K-E. They are two totally different words. You have accidentally spelled it this way 2-3 times that I saw in this chapter. But otherwise, good job! I like the storyline so far, though it somewhat reminds me of A Christmas Carol, by Charles Dickens. |
| TheDragonMage19 chapter 2 . 5/11/2018 This is pretty good so far! Good job & keep up the great work! |
| piccolaLilly17 chapter 7 . 2/12/2016 poor Davis :( UPDATE SOON PLEASE please Soon please |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/27/2015 Nice stroy |
| hello chapter 7 . 6/12/2014 Nice story. |
| tobby solis chapter 1 . 5/13/2013 Dup toby solis here please get back on this story it good n I like it n please also make it a daikari thanks see ya -toby good boy- |
| spyrofan34 chapter 4 . 9/10/2012 love it please update |
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/11/2011 Nice... I like the story can't wait for the next chapter |
| Talia Iyami chapter 6 . 2/20/2011 pleasse keep going! i gotta know the rest of the story! this is so cool! |
| Talia Iyami chapter 7 . 12/9/2010 please continue this! i want to hear the rest of the story! i love it! |
| DaiWolf chapter 7 . 3/12/2009 I agree with him please continue. |
| TheGreatAnimeFan chapter 7 . 10/31/2008 A shame you never continued this. This is a pretty good story. |
| Nonamenonamenonameplease chapter 7 . 6/15/2008 I can just picture Daisuke's crying face when he walked in on the others. But it looks like Mornamon's really reaching through. Who's the mysterious baddie? Perhaps Daemon, Myotismon, GranDracmon... Anyway, I hope Mornamon can suceed where Zanthmon failed. Unless you don't feel like continuing this...it's been years... This is better than two other parodies of It's A Wonderful Life that I remember. You could've gotten more mileage if you'd placed this after the series' end...ah, but maybe I'm just being biased. |
| Alex Warlorn chapter 7 . 4/26/2004 Cody in the series is rigid and harsh thinks lowly of the idea 'people can change' (his dad was a cop after all his father had to face the worst side of humanity daily). We can guess how Cody would have turned out. So, why did you never complete this? I know you're still writing. Do you know what happens next? Do you need help? Did you accidently write yourself into a corner? E-mail me if you need help. |
| Alex Warlorn chapter 5 . 4/26/2004 better that that." better than that." Question for the fans, is DemiDevimon Devimon reformatted or not? So when are we going to see what's going on with the others? These chapters are short and dizzingly high paced, but hey, what works, works. |
