Excellently done...is it complete? Would lover a folow up on this

This was a great Outcast tag! It was very realistic in the way that both John and Dave had their own perspectives of their relationship with their father. The distribution of the assets and the video made by Patrick was also believable. Money does tend to separate families, whether rich, poor, or somewhere in between. And, yeah, Sheppard would definitely take care of his guys!

I really love sheppard family stories. The boys rebuilding their relationship with the spector of the father is great. I was looking at your stories and saw something about a story with patrick going to atlantis is this posted anywhere?

I loved it. I really enjoy stories of sheppard and his family. Trying to forge new bonds not influenced by the father is great.

Now this story really took me back! I loved this episode and I love that you have given us more than we were left with at the end. Brothers stories are great. It's a pity the series didn't give us more of these two together. Also there was a lot of backstory in this which gaives us more insight into what may have happened in this family. Thanks for that. More to follow would be wonderful...an adventure while the boys are skiing for example?
Thanks for this story hon. I really enjoyed it and really hope to see more of your work with more brothers together...pretty please!

Have you thought of a follow up to this story? it's believable as two different estranged brothers picking up their lives after the death of their father.

Beautiful tale. Loved it. Hope to see more from you soon.

That was realy awsome. You pictured Dave's focus on the money realy well. I think John was very forgiving of his brothers asumetions and words.

I loved every moment of this story. I loved Patrick's long over due apology to John even if it didn't happen till after death. I love the John/Dave dynamic. I love the lights clicking on for Dave and seeing John in a better light and how important is job probably is. Great job.