Needs more chapters.

interesting but PLEASE stick to 3rd person as the randomly switching back and forth between 3rd and 1st person P.O.V's makes it annoying and confusing to read/follow this story at times

My friend when will you update this fic ? It's so good
Also if shiro becomes a Campione wouldn't it be fit for him to have Ahriman authorities?

Stop dragging, your previous fic is dragging so much it seriously kills all the excitement. There is no excitement anymore when its basically the same thing repeated for over 20k words starting from chapter 3 to chapter 5. I love long chapter but the previous fic was just repetitionunneccesary flashback.

I can't believe you make me even consider that Shirou should lose despite rooting for him a lot, just because it is dragged for too long. I was excited but just become pissed later on because it was dragging, and because by the time Shirou won the excitement has become irritiation. I don't even feel enjoyment after that. And yeah I blame you.

If I were to follow your fic's writing style in most simplest term it would be like this

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PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! It was awesome! I seriously want to see what comes after this battle, does Shirou gain one of Angra's authorities? How would everyone feel about knowing that their ancestors had talked to Shirou. What'll happen to Shirou after he broke his soul? Would it be able to heal? Cause I don't want him to lose his reality marble, it's too awesome to lose.

more it is what is the most amazing Stories I have read please continue it is an amazing story

OH MY GOODNESS! INTENSE! I loved every second of it! Please update!

This is just really interesting and I can't wait for more

"SlayXFate will be my top work", abandons it in a single chapter...

Trash fic delete pls

It was great. Everything was so great.
The drama, the action, everything.
Hope you update this soon!

BananaGun Out!

Que genial historia espero con ansias por el próximo capitulo . Enserio tienes que continuar con está genial historia .
Ya quiero ver que cambios traira shirou y su harem al universo de Campione y aún más a que dioses , shirou se enfrentara .
Pls que medusa se plenamente una diosa y si es posible se shirou tenga la capacidad de dar una o varias autoridades a sus esposas .
Creo se con el ingenio de Rin y Illya podrían crear su propia organización mágica ( posible chaldea ( f/go ) del universo de Campione ) en Alemania , ya que Japón esta ocupado por godou y su harem .

this was nice a really liked it

In my mind i was like 'Break' and the whole world shattered
Truly an epic end for the chapter, hope there is still more to come

Maybe i am just in a weird mood today, but this ... i feel very conflicted about this. I like it when somebody does a unique take, but this may actually be a bit too much (for my taste). But, well, there certainly are good elements in this story. Thenonly thjng i really didn't like was your try on comedy in this chapter. It just didn't work.