You should seriously continue! This is good!

Very good chapter

Ignored and rejected by his social worker and hurt by the foster parents meant to protect him, I've always wondered how G. Callen could ever become even semi-whole. Awesome chapter, awesome read. Thank you for sharing your talents and your imagination.

You stun me every time. You make everything seem real. I could totally see this happening. G's story is the one I've been waiting for. Sooooooo happy it's here.

I applaud you.

well that is not good
i think he needs rescuing
excellent chapter

well said Navy

You don't need to worry about this being bad. It is one of my favorite fics and I am infinitely excited for more of your work. This was a good chapter. Be happy.

Please continue this story! I'm in love with it

wonderful
liked this

This is really good so far. I love the idea of all the characters' back stories.. And you should do Callen next :)

good chapter. can't wait to read next one.

Awe, really great feel good chapter! Love the feelings of vulnerability and how fragile Deekss life is during this time frame and how tumultuous it was. So nice to see someone step in and give him a chance.

Definitely Kensi.

Glad Deeks found himself in a better place with someone he could trust. I also like the idea of switching characters between the different stages of their lives; I agree, it will keep your readers interested in what is yet to come. My favorite character ... Callen. Of all the childhoods, I think his would be the most interesting yet heartbreaking. Thanks for the great read!

Kensi should be next:)