Reviews for Heartless
Melinique chapter 28 . 8/23/2018
While I thoroughly enjoyed the first 27 chapters of this, WHY did it have to be Baron Corbin? Oh my God, I can NOT stand that guy! Even though I can kinda understand why Seth refused to go through THAT with Dean again.
Skovko chapter 28 . 8/22/2018
This was amazing. I love that Seth didn't end up with Dean or Roman and didn't quite get the happy ending although he still found someone. He really was a piece of shit in disguise all the way through.
RicanVibess chapter 28 . 8/15/2018
Really good read. you did great w character developmenti really hated what was going on haha. it was so good, thank you
AJ Bennington chapter 28 . 8/30/2016
Dean and seth should of been together this ending sucked
Guest chapter 28 . 8/11/2016
I thought this story was amazing.. Do you have any more that ship Ambrose/Rollins?
Jasmyne19 chapter 28 . 3/10/2016
Omg! I loved it! Great book! :)
Hunk Daddy Enthusiast chapter 28 . 8/18/2015
Absolutely perfect story, I'm so glad that I discovered & read this, it was absolutely incredible. I really loved the detail & reading this really hit home for me especially just having my heart ripped outta my chest from being in a "relationship" with a cheater, my heart just ached for poor, sweet Roman. And the sex in the story was outta this world, there's no better way to really describe it lol. Just excellent :)
Champbrose chapter 28 . 7/12/2015
I read this entire story in less than 3 days. You wrote such a beautiful heartbreaking story that literally pulled my heart right out of my chest. I really want to thank you for that though because I need my emotions messed with sometimes. I know it didn't end with Ambrollins but I'm okay that it didn't tbh. Seth finally stood his ground with dean and I'm so happy for him. Karma is served to everyone in the end. Maybe truthfully saying goodbye to his past is what was best for Seth. My heart really needed this. I'm #teamrollins af baby!
MummyMonkey chapter 28 . 5/2/2015
Such a wonderful story. It made me laugh, cry and cringe. Loved it so much. Loved the reference to Mr Drew McIntyre, he is major hot and I'm Scottish myself. Keep up the amazing work honey :) xxxx
RomansLady chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
I really want to see roman beat dean ass and maybe when he see seth make him feel like shit everytime he can.
ChocolateReignz chapter 28 . 2/24/2015
Since this is going to be my last review for this story it is going to be a long one... Sooooo

The heartless one... perfect.. Seth actually was the heartless one.. i felt more connected to what seth and roman had felt during this story.. cuz one way or other i have been where they are but never once i connected to dean... never been there nor done that.. but in my mind he was the one who had to be strong..choosing between whats right and what u want is so difficult and he kept on doing it.. he actually was the brave one and in a way he was coward too. i have loved the way how u portrayed ur characters... there was a time when i thought that it was gonna end up an ambrolleigns story,, cuz i thought that may be dean actually wants roman for himself thats why he keeps on jeopardizing his relationships... but to be honest i was disappointed when i felt its gonna be ambrollins... cuz if there is no roman my heart is not in it.. hahaha
but the way u ended it ... wow...
i mostly read and love happy endings but this was different for me and was nice to read..
Roman with cena .. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Seth with baron .. double aaaaaaaaaaaaa
Dean with nikki .. *loud screaming*
never and i mean never would i have thought this would be or ever imagine or go ahead to read..
but u made me do what i would not do normally... and i thank u for that...
i enjoyed it,,, even though sometimes i shouted at my phone and yelled at the story...
reading this story has been a roller coaster ride for me, you made me wait for updates also there were times when i wished that i do not have to read any more... those were the times when roman was hurting (obviously). .
But if i summarize my experience it was wow... unexpected but satisfactory...
but now i would go on and read something that has an actual happy ending,, with rolleigns (which is rare).. or ambreigns.. hahaha
Love to read more stories from u... waiting anxiously for what u have planned..
Love ya n ur work
oh i almost forgot.. thanks for mentioning me in ur note... i love to review.. every single story/chapter i read, i review it... and how could i not review ur awesome story..
lots of love and all the best...
P.S: if something else pops in my mind i might PM u...Hope u dont mind
JacktheSinister JaketheJust chapter 28 . 2/22/2015
Aw, you're making me teary-eyed here about Seth leaving Sami behind. I'm not okay with that. Poor guy... But he's doing well. Baron Corbin, shit Seth, you got some good taste yo! I was worried about his love life. And even him and Roman are on ..okay.. terms to be talking like that. And Roman's happy too. Even if I'm not a fan of John/Roman, I'm glad he's happy. He deserves that much at least.

Oh, this motherfucker though. Dean fucking "rip-other-people's-hearts-out-and-stomp-on-them-because-I'm-missing-one-of-my-own" Ambrose. Walking in here like he's important. I have nothing for you Dean, not a bit and I'm glad that Seth turned him away still, even with that year in between seeing each other. You should've said all this a year ago Dean, you fucked up, not that it matters because you still didn't say anything about being open with Seth, then or now. Even if Seth had fallen into his arms, he didn't say that he'd give him a real life without Nikkin constantly being in it, or hiding Seth away like a dirty little secret. Nothing would have changed, at least from where I'm sitting.

But overall, I'm really glad that Seth stayed with Baron, he needs a new start, and Baron is exactly that. But that last sentence was right.

Beautiful story, as always love. Even though I wanted to choke pretty much everyone at least once, I really enjoyed it! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! I'm really excited for it! Brava!
iReign92 chapter 28 . 2/22/2015
Glad Seth didn't go back to Dean even though he wasn't over him. I'm happy for Roman, he deserved to move on and have the life he always wanted. This story was great, thank you so much for sharing!
y2jgurl chapter 28 . 2/22/2015
Wow! I'm glad that I didn't waste my time reading and getting into this story from beginning otherwise I would've been more disappointed then I'm right now.

So, Dean finally tells Seth that he loves him only for Seth to not accept him. I don't care if Seth was in relationship because true love is greater than any stupid commitment that a man makes to keep himself protected & pretend happy. Your story is trying to state that people will give up on their true love to protect themselves form heartache. Lady, that's is bullshit!

Okay, enough of harsh words but all I'm gonna say that this story's ending could have been better.

WASTED OPPORTUNITY!
Guest chapter 28 . 2/22/2015
You are the best writer of this website. Your story is just awesome ! Thanks and congratulations !
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