Reviews for The Journey of the Champion
KoriSeiyuri chapter 6 . 5/27
please continue and you can choose either or you could do both
PokemonFan13 chapter 4 . 3/25
Never understand why not increase the age for trainers instead of brainwashing pokemons for the sake of immature 10 year old kids going in journeys?
PokemonFan13 chapter 2 . 3/25
Wait don't Ash have many pokemons that haven't evolved even after more than 15 years have passed? Also did Ash have Dratini abuse and force Charmander into obeying Ash? Kinda abusive for a 10 year old kid don't ya think?
Kazuto Tetsuya chapter 1 . 3/21
I find the conversations as too formal and bland to be about two individuals talking to each other. It's like there is no difference to the narration at all.
As for the paragraph as a whole, it's pretty well made and understable so that's enough for me.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/9/2019
really good please contimue
v chapter 6 . 6/23/2019
excellent well
Toby Hark chapter 6 . 6/4/2019
I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!
killernooch chapter 2 . 5/23/2019
I'm very confused why they're making a big deal about a dratini taking out a nidoran, unless you meant one of it's evolved forms
Toby Hark chapter 6 . 4/16/2019
I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!
powermachine79 chapter 6 . 2/26/2019
Hope you will continue this great story soon
Guest chapter 6 . 1/7/2019
Jason Grace... Fan of Percy Jackson I presume?
darkworkangel chapter 6 . 10/21/2018
do you plan to finish this
King.1024 chapter 6 . 9/24/2018
Plss update i like your story
pyoson123 chapter 1 . 7/7/2018
I meant its dumb
pyoson123 chapter 1 . 7/7/2018
55ft is not dumb that's too fucking huge
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